Reality is bleeding

Reality is bleeding

A Poem by Ender
"

the old realities of past norms are dying...

"
Do not be in blind denial,
our reality is bleeding!
- Dying a gruesome death
that came by the life-war of
cruel adulterous dynasties. 

Numb was humanity to
not notice the crying.
- Desensitized by the
pornography of war, bestiality
became the new the norm.

The scene of this reality
is changing, hence the obscenity 
of idol worship.
- Nonsensical it must be,
but was it all a vanity's gain?

Innocent, or was it the
ignorance of free-will's true
potential?
- To have such a power, 
and playing with risk.

Reality is now catatonic,
lifeless on it's death bed.
- Slipping away with
irrelevance to never be worried
about again.

© 2011 Ender


Author's Note

Ender
this poem encompasses how much our day is different from the dead generations before us. War, internet pornography, media, the idiocy of governments trying to do what is right, but makes a bigger problem later... All of what is said in the sentence before is happening- and the world is in denial to see.

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WOW. YOU CAPTURED THAT REALLY WELL. IT IS SO TRUE. NEW GENERATION BRINGS CHANGES OF COURSE...POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE. WE HAVE ALL OF THIS TECHNOLOGY NOW (LIKE YOU SAID INTERNET) THAT ALLOWS US TO GET INTO ALL KINDS OF THINGS GOOD AND BAD. VERY VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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You have said it all in this poem! Great write my friend!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW. YOU CAPTURED THAT REALLY WELL. IT IS SO TRUE. NEW GENERATION BRINGS CHANGES OF COURSE...POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE. WE HAVE ALL OF THIS TECHNOLOGY NOW (LIKE YOU SAID INTERNET) THAT ALLOWS US TO GET INTO ALL KINDS OF THINGS GOOD AND BAD. VERY VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Excellant. I really like it. Everything the poem said is true especially the 2nd and 3rd line in the first stanza. "our reality is bleeding!
- Dying a gruesome death"


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was a bare-it-all kind of poem... What I mean is it gave a true insight, exposing the atrocities that are in continuation in our modern day society and so "Reality dies a gruesome death"... excellently put together my friend... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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