Talking S**t

These flashbacks won't go away

It's every single f*****g day

I'll sit here and pretend

Until the end

Wait no, no more f*****g pretending

No more f*****g back bending

I'm done trying to please everyone else

Don't f*****g care if your heart melts

I'm done

No more f*****g fun

I don't even care what you think

Hold one wait a second. Just blink.

I'm gone

Forgone

You don't have to think

There is no longer a missing link

You don't even have to talk s**t

You need to f*****g quit

You don't f*****g know me

So why the hell are you harping on me?

Go and fix your own f*****g problems

Slay your own god damned goblins

Cause I'm f*****g done

No more f*****g fun.

Reviews

[Lily]

Love this, raw and passionate, which is cool... Maybe needs a 'brace yourself' warning at the start haha.
Keep your chin up girl :)

[ashleymarie]

Thank you!!! c:

[Rewel Acosta Rivera]

This poem is like a explosion of feelings. Part of write is free the soul as the poet need. Then the soul have a healing break. I love the natural fury of this poem, Is human nature.

Thanks for share this poem. I admire your talent.

[ashleymarie]

Thank you!

[Rewel Acosta Rivera]

;), Have a beauty day. And keep your faith on life, friend.

[ashleymarie]

Thank you!!! You do the same!

[Zoltan]

Sound like you are starting to face the waves! ;)
Just keep doing it. You definitely have the potential!
Your writings are good for you and us readers as well... don't stop!

[ashleymarie]

I really apreciate it!

[Cool Girl]

God this is great! I honestly love how you used that curse word even though I don't curse!

[ashleymarie]

Hahah..Yeah..If you were ever to see me angry, this is kind of what it would be like!

[Cool Girl]

Haha..
Well, I don't normally get people angry xD

[Cindy Marietta]

I really love this oh my gosh. It's so brutal and honest and shows so much emotion to the negative vibes that were coming your way. And I love how many times you used the word f**k because that is my favorite word. Great poem:) P.S. after reading this I wouldn't mess with you!

[Satan]

Haha straight up. It can be used in so many contexts, it truly is a f*****g amazing word.

[ashleymarie]

Aw...Thanks! Yeah. A whole bunch of people are having fun picking on me...Like god damn people are cruel!...lol...but yeah f**k is seriously my favorite word when I'm angry!

[Lizardo]

"I'm done trying to please everyone else"
I say Amen to that line, can't be good with people when they treat you like sh*t.

[ashleymarie]

That has literally been my whole life...being pushed around..and finally I stand up for myself...at least now no one f***s with me anymore...hahah

[Lizardo]

hahaha, I've been kind of pushed around too, but I got tired of it and made my prescence feel and how much I am worth.

[ashleymarie]

Probably a better way to handle it!

[Lizardo]

Probably it was

[Satan]

Damn Ash your fire burns hot!

[ashleymarie]

Did I not tell you Ive been getting into fights at school?...I'm pretty sure I did!..lol...but yea.

[Satan]

ummm ahhh! I hope you're keeping your hands and feet to yourself haha

[ashleymarie]

Ummm....sometimes!

[wordman]

damn girl,sounds like your pissed off boy friend,friend or a pareny

[ashleymarie]

I'm one of those girls who gets made fun of on a daily...So when things resurface...I tend to get a little on edge c:

[wordman]

well I hope you never get mad at me lol

[ashleymarie]

Well don't make fun of me in a harsh or irrational way..and there will be no problem!
lol!