..and it got better.

..and it got better.

A Poem by asmae
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i just want to tell you to hang on in there, it will get better, i promise.

"
I remember all the nights i stayed awake
Staring at the moon, the stars..hoping god would be somewhere near.
I wanted to talk to god.
I wanted to ask him about the what happened? and, why me? sort of questions.
However, god didn't reply.
At least that's how i imagined it all in my mind..
My world was the perfect definition of misery
My world was a dark cage
A jail that was never willing to open its doors
I was just praying that it will get better
I was helpless and weak
I didn't know what to do, how to live, or how to just go with the flow.
My pain was lying to me.
It wasn't gonna last
but it was lying to me
Telling me that it will.
I felt and looked tired
I wanted to leave..
to just leave..
but i kept thinking that maybe, maybe this will soon come to an end..
and it did.
This nightmare was coming to an end.
I'm finally waking up.
Gosh, it felt like forever
But it got better, it got better..
And it continues to do.

© 2017 asmae



Author's Note

asmae
this is my first poem here. i hope you'll ignore how imperfect it is.

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Dear Poet. A powerful and worthwhile poem. I liked the honest tone and the thoughts. You described fear and you wanted answers. Today world. I do wonder what the children think about? Do they see a safe world? I loved this poem. You made me fall into the thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


asmae

1 Year Ago

ow i loved your comment. thank you for noticing my poem x
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I did notice and you are a wonderful writer. You are welcome.
I love the positive message you provide in this lovely write...excellent. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


asmae

1 Year Ago

so glad to hear that xx
T0TS

1 Year Ago

:)
Love this! It does Keep getting better doesn't it? Think we are all united in feeling deep emotions. Keep sharing from your heart!

Posted 1 Year Ago


asmae

1 Year Ago

thank you for the lovely comment x
there are ups and downs but we should always pick ourselv.. read more
It's not imperfect, your nightmare of fear did well and you chose wise words....
Nothing to point your flaws here...
Thank you Asmae for sharing..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

asmae

1 Year Ago

thank you so much for the lovely words♡
Surya

1 Year Ago

Your always welcome dear..:)
Nicely written. Keep that up.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

asmae

1 Year Ago

thank you! x
You have described very accurately what I felt once.

Posted 1 Year Ago


asmae

1 Year Ago

that's great x

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