i don't like you

i don't like you

A Poem by asmae
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please if you have something more productive to do, don't bother reading this piece of s**t

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darling
i don't like you
i don't  like the emotions.
i don't see the point of your existence in my world.
your smile is distracting me
the feeling of looking at you is what i hate the most.
i don't like your hugs
they make me feel secure
they make me feel frightened
they make me feel anything and everything at the same time
i don't like you.
you are confusing me
you are wasting my already wasted times.
leave me alone with me.
do not love me, and do not say those words.
they can murder me.
i don't like you.
i don't like the emotions.
i don't know how to feel
i don't know how to live
and i don't know how to breathe
i feel helpless, weary, delicate
just leave me alone with me.
i don't want your company
i don't want a company
i just don't like it.

© 2017 asmae



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Very nice use of honest thoughts. I liked the flow of thoughts and the need to be left alone. Needing great separation from the other person. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


asmae

11 Months Ago

much lovee x
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

Thank you. A amazing poem.
i don't see the point of your existence in my world.
your smile is distracting me
the feeling of looking at you is what i hate the most.


You like that person and trying hard to hide what you really feel, isnt it ?? well written


i don't like you.
i don't like the emotions.
i don't know how to feel
i don't know how to live
and i don't know how to breathe
i feel helpless, weary, delicate
HURT ?? the depth talks a lot about your writing. wow, superliked it

Posted 11 Months Ago


asmae

11 Months Ago

yeah.. i like that person and i dont like the feeling of liking him.
i'm so glad you enjoyed .. read more
This poem gives me chills!! Love it so much. You did an amazing job of describing that deep rooted fear, fear of trusting, fear of believing, fear if needing. Bravo! Keep it up

Posted 11 Months Ago


asmae

11 Months Ago

ow thank you so much girl x)
According to me, I guess the boy really likes the girl I can understand it through his words. Very well written. It was so good that I couldn't help running my imagination.

Posted 11 Months Ago


asmae

11 Months Ago

yes, this is exactly what it's all about xD thank you dear
Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

You're welcome
State of confusion in heart, strong no from conscious mind....nice to see from you....i liked it..

Posted 11 Months Ago


asmae

11 Months Ago

you gave a great description to what i wrote. im glad u liked it♡
Surya

11 Months Ago

You r welcome..:)

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asmae
asmae

Rabat, temara, Morocco



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