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I had walked alone

I had walked alone

A Poem by asmae

I had walked alone that day
I wanted to see how it goes
I had walked alone that day
And i didn't realize it would be the worst
The only reason is i can't be by myself
I'm scared of my own company!
My body feels strange
There is something i should change!
But i didn't dare to think about it
I just kept walking
Craving someone's hug, someone's smiles and silly jokes that will make me feel
less alone
I had walked alone that day
and i realized
I didn't only feel alone, i felt lonely
My thoughts were too heavy for my brain
I felt so abnormal, so insane
This isn't me
This isn't me
Who the hell just came and took my place?
I want to get out of this body
I want to find somebody
To wake me up from this nightmare
that i have created for myself
This made-up reality
This terrible company
I had walked alone that day
And i realized
I should never walk alone again.

© 2017 asmae



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Growing up I was terrified of a lot of things, as I think we all are... The thing that terrifies me most, (tied with spiders, actually...) Is the crushing canopy of silence when truly alone... We are our own worst enemy, truly... Terrifyingly penned...

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Superb poetry... I liked contents of your poetries.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Growing up I was terrified of a lot of things, as I think we all are... The thing that terrifies me most, (tied with spiders, actually...) Is the crushing canopy of silence when truly alone... We are our own worst enemy, truly... Terrifyingly penned...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow what a journey, I actually wanted to write something similar, about walking alone, this writing actually gave me goosebumps.

This was a good read, thank you for writing it :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A powerful journey in your words. Life is lesson and more lesson. Hard to walk alone. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to realistic ending. Thank you asmae for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


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asmae
asmae

Rabat, temara, Morocco



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