A Single Cut

Emotions and experiences that most teens might have encountered in their life! This poem goes through the three stages of my life.. ;)

Lived my life,the life that you made,

We've been through a lot,

A lot that i bore..

I still remember,vaguely,but it's true..

You made me what i am,

and broke me when you left..

Now all that i've been through,

feels like a single cut to the throat!

Yeah! A single..single cut!

No! I'm still not dead ..

As life goes on,my blood runs out,

you never turned back..

But someday,an angel will come..

I was dying,with nothing to live for,

My angel,You would hold me..Heal my cut..

Clear my thoughts..And help me start a new life!

But nothing happened! All those,still dreams!

The cut now rots,like my life,

And all that i've been through,

Feels like a single cut to the throat!

You could have just killed me!

But you just let me be..

To make me suffer?!

Suffer,I did!

Finally! It happened..An angel came..

But i was too blind with pain!

I saw you in her..I never could love!

The love that's now lost,

somewhere not ever to be found!

The blood is now oozing out,

It was just a single cut,

A single cut to the throat!

The cut now feels deeper,

the pain slowly going sore!

But i had someone..Someone who listened..

Someone who cared,

But i was too scared!

Scared to love,

scared to express what's in my mind,

scared that i'll lose you if i speak my mind!

So the single cut,it's now a scar..

A scar that never could be healed,

Unless or until i'd be brave,

the life that i've been through,

will always feel like the single cut that you gave!!

Author's Note

My Story.. :) I've been cheated on,I've given too much love,I've been broken!

Reviews

[Meeks]

I am extremely prejudice against any poems that have to do with cuttint, largely because most usually don't have style and there are mountains of them on this website. Cutting, cutting, every other person writes about it all the time.
This is one of the better ones I've seen so far, so don't feel too bad, but you do need to switch topics. People who cut avoid writing about cutting, and people who haven't quelched their morbid interest still write (almost everybody).

Good job on this though. Sorry for the delay, I'm really backed up with my RR's.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Some things just come to the mind and i just write it :) i don't think twice about writing anything..
Thank you for your review ..

[several thousand]

And some write about what it's like to see others cutting themselves... tbh it's not nice at all, seeing that... it's horrible to say the least. What about the ones who care...

[Aswin R Prasad]

Are we going a little off topic here? ;)

[ExquisiteEyes]

You have expressed the pain and sadness extremely well. I like the way you have spoken about the dilemma of speaking or not speaking one's mins

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much..

[Zequis]

Strong poem. Good Emotive piece. The "up side", for lack of a better phrase, is you survived the cut - though given and now a painful scar/memory - you still survived.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Yeah.. thank you so much

[Asif Balouch]

An awesome and outstanding poem, bravo loved it

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you.. :)

[Sage]

Wow, it shows the depth of the pain one (in this case, probably you) Has (have) experienced. You really did a great job with the words. However, I'd like to point out a few things if you do not mind.

"But someday,an angel will com.." I believe, it should be 'come'.

"But nothing happened! All those still dreams!" I think it would sound better if you wrote 'All those are still dreams'

Keep writing! I'd love to read more :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you .. And i'll fix that :)

[Sage]

Sure thing! :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

And about the other line..It's just my style of writin'.. ;) And i'd like to stick with that.. :)read moreAnd about the other line..It's just my style of writin'.. ;) And i'd like to stick with that.. :)

Anyway.. Thank you for your review.. Really appreciate it.. :)

[Sage]

Ah, okay then :)

[zunie frost]

so lovely and a deep emotional write !! thanks for sharing such a cute piece of work !

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much..

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!!

[Emily]

'You could have just killed me!'
I really like this line!
Keep it up!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you.. Glad you liked it!