Blur

People change..And sometimes you can't bear the change.. :)

Now, when i look at you,

i see a stranger,

A 'stranger' who i've met before..

Then, i think of the times,

when i could see through you,

Your thoughts,

they were so clear,

as a kid with no fear..

I see you standing there,

But what i don't see now,

is what we had,

is how we were,

And now it's all so blur..

So blur,

that i can't even speak up,

that i don't want to,

that i don't get you..

So i sit there,

with my mouth shut,

and my mind concealed!

It's strange that people change..

People who were clear,

people who now are so blur!

Author's Note

Kept it short ! :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

People change and we change.
"It's strange that people change..
People who were clear,
people who now are so blur!"
I don't like change but you can't stop change. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you.. glad you liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Rye]

So i sit there,
with my mouth shut,
and my mind concealed!
It's strange that people change..
People who were clear,
people who now are so blur!

Love this part, I could feel this one, Nice rhythm in this piece.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you.. glad you liked it! :)

[B. Hudson]

normally I'm not the biggest fan of poems that rhyme. however, this one really stuck out to me. it shows the honesty of one's past and now present. people change, yes!! but, sometimes we must move forward and remember the memories!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you for your time and review! :) glad that you liked it

[Paramount]

Wow. Incredible. I really enjoyed it. :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thanks a lot .. Glad that you liked it :)

[Paramount]

Of course ... it was quite intense. :) I really like how you capture certain feelings and moments. Very nice. :)