Die Unknown

I just wanna leave my mark..I just wanna do my thing!

When I leave,I'll leave leavin' a mark..

If you wanna stop me ,try to.. 

I'll still do what I wanna do! 

I just don't wanna die unknown,

Leavin' back something to think upon..

You know that when you're unbounded!

Unbounded by people who suppress ..

Nothing to hold you back..

Nothing to throw you off track!

I just have my path set,

To keep on doing what I like,

Listenin' to people discourage,

Gives me the strength to stand up..

Stronger than ever,

What they say only encourage!

I need your negativity.. Gimme some more!

I'll turn it to my will, 

You can be that unworthy w***e!,

Who goes on sayin' I won't succeed,

'Cuz you can only do that,

And I'm just gonna feed,

On what you say ,I'll get you back!

I write to calm myself down..poems,raps..

Call it whatever,I'll keep on trying!

Trying to leave a mark! 

And when I'm old and sittin' by my love,

I'd have a story to tell,

Nyah! Not a story..But what I felt!

Maybe at first people might have a frown,

But nothing can stop me in my tracks..

I'll learn what I lack,

Something special I'll pack,

With each write I write,

I'll give my heart a fight!

I know that no one can hold me down,

And I'm not ever gonna die unknown!

Author's Note

My passion! Not gonna say nothing more! :)

Please do read and review!

Reviews

[zunie frost]

love it !!
mind blowing piece of work my friend
you are really great
superb and talented

[Tiffany K Charles]

A legacy is what we all want to leave...... A big bold mark....... very well written.... with emotions and truth...... and everything we feel.....

[Coyote Poetry]

Positive and good energy in the poem. I like the need and the goal of the poem. No-one want to live a life unknown to others. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Ardra]

Very artfully written good one aswin .... keep writing :) you will not die unknown ...

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much.. glad you liked it :)

[Adesanya Yewande]

Wow.thats an inspiring poem,i also dont want to die unknown,i want to leave an impression in the world,your poem really did inspire me on been more courageous

[Aswin R Prasad]

Really glad that i could inspire ! You've made my day! :) Thank you so much! :)

[Emily]

Love how you started it!
Well done!!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you :)

[matpat]

Oh my gosh, this is beautiful, love this poem! Keep writing!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much for your time :)