The World Between

The World Between

A Poem by Aswin R Prasad
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Thoughts

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THE WORLD BETWEEN


Sometimes I fall into a dream like sleep,
But not asleep with a dream unseen.

Then a sudden trip back to reality,
And where I went stays a mystery.


© 2016 Aswin R Prasad



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Aswin R Prasad
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That's so true. I liked it.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Simply wonderful..... Many mysteries i've gone to in my dreams..... And most I never want to leave

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lovely poem!
I loved it!
Keep on writing!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


love it !!!
great job.
nicely done

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

1 Year Ago

thanks zunie.
zunie frost

1 Year Ago

Welcome !!!
How dreams play the mind. A good write

Posted 1 Year Ago


Aswin R Prasad

1 Year Ago

Thank you. :)
Very awesome read. I like how your writing flows together, to make me visualize everything that's going on. Many stories on here do that, and that's why most of the stories I read on here are good because you all are very talented and gifted, I visualized everything as I was reading it. Great writing. On to another topic. I have a website where I post my short stories, and blogs on. I also have ads on the website. I was wondering if you can go to my website, and click on any ad. you don't have to buy anything, I promise you won't get any viruses, all it is is google adsense on my website, and the more clicks on the ads, the more it helps grow my website. My website is bwlawson.com I appreciate it, that you would be taking part in helping my craft, business, product, and brand grow. Thank you!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Aswin R Prasad

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reviewing. :)
unique piece that uses very few words to potrayed a lot. Good work

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the review. :)
this is ineffable! I don't even have words to describe this amazing work! I don't from where do i begin!
absolutely wonderful!
keep writing :D

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

1 Year Ago

Hehe. Thank you so much. Really glad that you liked it. :)
I like the simplicity of the poem! The last line is also my favorite.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aswin R Prasad

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your review. Glad that you like it. :)

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Aswin R Prasad
Aswin R Prasad

Payyanur, Kannur, India



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I'm 18. I've been writing poems since for a while now..Most of the poems i write are based on my feelings.. The poems i write are mostly unorthodox and i tend to keep it that way! ;) Also love t.. more..

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