No One Like You

No One Like You

A Poem by Aswin R Prasad
"

The fear of losing a person who's drifting away

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You could even see through my eyes, 
through my mind and through my soul 
when no one else knows What is left untold.. 
 Still, I was never ever satisfied, 
 Living a lie and living a while.. 
 When I already knew the fire's gonna die.. 
And dying out.. Even though we fought.. 
Commin back each time And for cryin out loud 
It just was a fragile line 
 A line that we broke, 
 Till I was lost in the colours of your cold. 
 The warmth I never saw was a place I wanna know. 
 Greys fields , the maze shields Trapped within but I could still feel.. 
Feel everything but it felt surreal.. 
Only before you I ll ever kneel. 
 No one like you, And the only truth I knew 
Was that nobody could replace you 
You were the truth you were the root.. 
The cause,my muse The only one I didn't wanna lose. 
 No one like you.. 
And to find someone better than you when I'm lost in.. 
In you.. Your depth that crept upon me without the slightest of notice.. 
the depth from which I can't get out when I'm trying my hardest. 
I fall back, into the same dark depth.. 
Darkness that your light couldn't clear.. 
Your light.. You.. Driftin away, far.. 
And the only fear was "will the light disappear.? ".. 
 No one like you.. No one like you..

© 2016 Aswin R Prasad



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Aswin R Prasad
After a long time. Penned down something I thought was worth uploading. 😉

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Some amazing lines and visuals here Aswin...the quality of soul seeking in love is palpable and yet the self still wanders and wonders their own journey at times...brings bonds and connections into a new light...beautiful...

Posted 10 Months Ago


Aswin R Prasad

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
Amazing use of words and thoughts.
"No one like you.. No one like you.."
I like the above lines and when someone make our heart dance and sing. We are lucky. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


Aswin R Prasad

10 Months Ago

Thank you 😊
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

You are welcome.
A very intriguing piece. The usage of words was really good. I loved the line "Till I was lost in the colours of your cold.
The warmth I never saw
was a place I wanna know." Amazing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Aswin R Prasad

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much. :)
I think it's amazing :)!.Thank you for sharing :)!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Aswin R Prasad

11 Months Ago

Thank you :) Really appreciate it.

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Added on November 20, 2016
Last Updated on December 17, 2016
Tags: Missing, love, best friend, hope, sad

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Aswin R Prasad
Aswin R Prasad

Payyanur, Kannur, India



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I'm 18. I've been writing poems since for a while now..Most of the poems i write are based on my feelings.. The poems i write are mostly unorthodox and i tend to keep it that way! ;) Also love t.. more..

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