Be Alright

When everything feels wrong.

(Chorus)

wide awake, wide awake,it all gets so hard(2)

will you take my hand and make a shadow?(2)



(Verse 1)

I just thought ,yeah, I just thought 

thought that we were gonna be alright

Right when things broke down ,Imma be alright

Imma be alright ,yeah, Imma be alright

So when we talk at night 

Or when we fight 

Think off all the times, lonely times.

all the sad rhymes

and my arm full of lines

baby just tryta think of it as just some f*****g simple signs..

simple signs of the times when we broke our fragile line.,yeah..

so just take a pause and think of it all(2)

(pause)

Just take a pause and think of all the loss

How we lost in our life or how we always thought

Now we're in a f*****g drought , there's no love none at all,

I've been stuck here for so long, but i guess your out

helpless , but i guess I'll be alright..yeah,

I'll be alright and this is what I'll think tonight..

(Chorus)

wide awake, wide awake,it all gets so hard(2)

will you take my hand and make a shadow?(2)

(Verse 2)

So lemme switch it up now,

I've been waiting for so long

I've been writing all these songs

baby I'm the real deal 

Trynna correct all these wrongs 

Karma is a real b***h ,b***h I'm never done with

b***h I can't keep up with ,She's a real needy b***h

I'm trynna f*****g wake up with

She pulls me down, n I'm bound

But what she does makes me lit.

What we did is of the grid ,

a good kid who did all the sins

and never hoped to be punished.. 

so let us take some time out now..

Keep up.

(pause)

Nobody to me you're Nobody to me..

But the pain is f*****g real

All the rains and storm I'll feel 

Feel the rage that I believe

Is the the rage that can't be healed.. 

And The rage that can't be healed is the fame I want to feel

feel the blame I take for free

but i know i'll never be,

so please lemme be, just lemme f*****g bleed!

(Chorus)

wide awake, wide awake,it all gets so hard(2)

will you take my hand and make a shadow?(2)

(Verse 3)

 

When you left I was done , 

Runnin through what's undone,

Everything was fucked up but you were never one of em..

You said you wanted freedom but all I had were demons...

Evil in my soul was beaten

but you were the reason I succeeded.

I exeeded what I always wanted was rewarded, 

but the fame was never needed and

i always tried to sheild it and 

I only wanted you but you were not conceded..

Hoped to see it but I failed even though I f****n pleaded 

Was defeated , was depleted all the way I was mistreated..

And I woke up to the sound of f*****g dissipation,

Levitated to the top till I was f****n droped

In a dream with all my demons ,alone n undefeated..!

I was seated in a room full of shadows of revival 

Just revoked what I had,it was not for my survival

I will be the f****n god in a big f****n bible 

so just wait for my recital, hope it won't be suicidal.! haha

(Chorus)

wide awake, wide awake,it all gets so hard(2)

will you take my hand and make a shadow?(2)

Author's Note

My new song. Give it a listen and read. :) Please do leave your reviews.

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

It's ok I think the emotion is raw as it would be even without overdoing it with the f**k word but that's just me!

[matpat]

love the flow of words, you're doing a good job

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice flow of words. I could hear the song my friend. I liked the song also. You are doing well. Music and song. A dangerous combination.
Coyote

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you for your kind review. Really appreciate it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Ruth]

I think rock bottom being the term can actually turn us around to acceptance and defiance in a way, defiance to ridicule the negative and move forward through purging and faith...powerful piece...

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you for your review poppy. Much appreciated. :)

[Ruth]

My pleasure :)