A New Outlook

Time seems to have mend the past damage.

Nearly been two months

Memories of us in the dust

Finally I see hope

Its in the distance

And there's no more resistance

 

I've come to learn

What it is to yearn

A spiritual high

To complete my life

And help me fly

 

I will be strong

No longer in the wrong

I will have faith

To patiently wait

And live my own way

Enjoying every day

 

There is no denying

No more crying

My fears are long gone

I don't mind being on my own

 

A new outlook

Thats what I took

As I start a new chapter

In my life's book.

Author's Note

Finally I am moving on from the unexpected breakup and have learn to breathe again.

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

Solid archetypal stuff. That classic human journey of breathing deep, till one can suck it up, and turn with new quiet resolve to what lies ahead, after a long time looking backward, enduring that barbed wire pang in the gut and heart.

"I don't mind being on my own" -- that's the essence of personal courage, intelligent self-regard. Then, subsequently one's relationships are based increasingly on sharing strengths, than on anxiety at being alone.

Excellent job with a very important human theme.

[The Analog Kid]

Poignant and brave. We all get to this point at times. Just real.

[Ama May Cooper]

Very true and understandble reality. Displaying a sense of true strength and power within you. I sympahise greatly but i have not yet reached this point and hope one day i can write with quite silent an dpowerful disregard for what once was.

[Legion]

Pen it well. It will be your masterpiece.

[emmajoy]

I love the way you've written this, sincere, brief, unfussy and. the intention very clear.

You seem full of optimism and that's great.

Thanks for asking me to read, it's a pleasure.

[black_rose_obsession]

I will seriously love and embarce this undying work of art!!! I can realte on levels creepy cause I don't even know you and i've never talked to you and yet...you've grasped my hearts concept in a single poem.
A.WORK.OF.ART!!!!!!!

[Arthur Crow]

This is a very empowering read, the expression is strong and vibrant. Very well crafted :)

[Ebs]

A powerful poem about hope and overcoming the pain of a break up. Wonderful.

Well done

air kisses
ebs