For you, My friend

For you, My friend

A Poem by The dark story

 

 

 

                        

or  you, my friend.

 

Distance is in mile

 Yet I can feel your slightest smile

With you the moments are in ecstatic prime

For, truly, your friendship is sublime.

 

I love your seldom stupidity

Mostly your wisdom and serenity

I revere you when you encourage me

Yeah, I’m irked when you “defeat” me.

 

Your writes sparks inspiring inferno

Your thoughts strikes mind with a blow

Your laugh vanishes my tears

Your presence in my dream conquests my fears.

 

I  thank Heaven for this present

For a “priceless bond” , they have sent.

It’s divinity will shine till the end

Thank you so much for being MY FRIeND.

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2013 The dark story



Author's Note

The dark story
a tribute to my cutest, "budhdhu-est", best-est of best friend. thank you so much for being a part of my life.

"side by side or miles apart...best friends are always close to heart."

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so very touchin', & phenomenally realistic! lovely lines here:

"Your laugh vanishes my tears
Your presence in my dream conquests my fears... "

i believe, friendship's one "blessing" in this world that keeps every "relations and relationships" bound with something majestic bond which may only be understood via the thread of heart, undisguised. it even inter-connects the feelings throu' the vibrancy of soul, & reads out those feelings throu' the frequency of mind.

also, i like the point you mentioned above which's 'bout "LAUGH". yeah, what my philosophy says here is, as long as a guy's succeeded to make a gal laugh even when she's being sad or not in a mood to give a damn, their friendship can stay ev'n for life because, "A LAUGH" is what everybody needs when a tuft of "smiles" seems to be stumbled around. very intriguing poetry or a tribute you treasured your "budhdhu-est" with. nice imagery here.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I thank Heaven for this present
For a “priceless bond” , they have sent.
It’s divinity will shine till the end
Thank you so much for being MY FRIeND.

A very reliable tribute,
You can find many friend on the way but rare is good and real friend.
Great write and read friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


The dark story

2 Years Ago

Thank you for buying your time and reading my work. And indeed its better to have few friends which .. read more
Saddam

2 Years Ago

You're welcome dear.
I read this over and over to enjoy all its aspects. Bravo...:)......

Posted 2 Years Ago


The dark story

2 Years Ago

Thank you.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....
Dear Atiba,

A very mild flavor of Indian touch to the poetry I felt.

This was not written with the aim of professional writing rather, you just spoke our your heart. It was blissful reading your write. Perfectly inked, with the right amount of words and appropriate intimacy without any limits.

Great writing. Keep up the good writing.

Blessed be you and your dear friend, for friends are an idol to portray that, you have a love cultivating heart.

Regards
Prodical

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The dark story

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for this kind and uplifting review!! I hope to this keep up, thanks again!
prodicallife

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.

Regards
Prodical
sooooooooooooo sweet and lovely atiba! great^^

Posted 3 Years Ago


The dark story

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.
a lovely friendship composition, a touching one too. liked it :)

best wishes

Posted 3 Years Ago


Such a devoted, warm tribute to a friend, nicely worded and beautifully presented, I enjoyed! Very well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

3 Years Ago

thank you so much for this lovely review. It means a lot.
i really enjoyed reading this one because it reminded my of my best friend

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

3 Years Ago

Wow! I am glad it reminded you of someone special. Thanks for enjoying it.
We learn early on to share our paths... makes their walking less lonely.

Posted 4 Years Ago


TRUE friendship is hard to find but it can be a treasure to keep forever

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

3 Years Ago

Very wisely said. Thanks for coming by and for the encouragement.
Dr. Wood ?

3 Years Ago

merry christmas
This poem is so very supreme cool!!! I am like' wow', 'cool', 'wow'. You have done a commendable job. Love it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


anxia

4 Years Ago

Say friends are the best!!!
The dark story

4 Years Ago

Haha…naa freinds are the bestest best!!
anxia

4 Years Ago

Lol truer :P

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