For you, My friend

 

 

 

                        

or  you, my friend.

 

Distance is in mile

 Yet I can feel your slightest smile

With you the moments are in ecstatic prime

For, truly, your friendship is sublime.

 

I love your seldom stupidity

Mostly your wisdom and serenity

I revere you when you encourage me

Yeah, I’m irked when you “defeat” me.

 

Your writes sparks inspiring inferno

Your thoughts strikes mind with a blow

Your laugh vanishes my tears

Your presence in my dream conquests my fears.

 

I  thank Heaven for this present

For a “priceless bond” , they have sent.

It’s divinity will shine till the end

Thank you so much for being MY FRIeND.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

a tribute to my cutest, "budhdhu-est", best-est of best friend. thank you so much for being a part of my life.

"side by side or miles apart...best friends are always close to heart."

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

so very touchin', & phenomenally realistic! lovely lines here:

"Your laugh vanishes my tears
Your presence in my dream conquests my fears... "

i believe, friendship's one "blessing" in this world that keeps every "relations and relationships" bound with something majestic bond which may only be understood via the thread of heart, undisguised. it even inter-connects the feelings throu' the vibrancy of soul, & reads out those feelings throu' the frequency of mind.

also, i like the point you mentioned above which's 'bout "LAUGH". yeah, what my philosophy says here is, as long as a guy's succeeded to make a gal laugh even when she's being sad or not in a mood to give a damn, their friendship can stay ev'n for life because, "A LAUGH" is what everybody needs when a tuft of "smiles" seems to be stumbled around. very intriguing poetry or a tribute you treasured your "budhdhu-est" with. nice imagery here.

[Saddam]

I thank Heaven for this present
For a “priceless bond” , they have sent.
It’s divinity will shine till the end
Thank you so much for being MY FRIeND.

A very reliable tribute,
You can find many friend on the way but rare is good and real friend.
Great write and read friend.

[The dark story]

Thank you for buying your time and reading my work. And indeed its better to have few friends which are real and true.

[Saddam]

You're welcome dear.

[Sami Khalil]

I read this over and over to enjoy all its aspects. Bravo...:)......

[The dark story]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....

[prodicallife]

Dear Atiba,

A very mild flavor of Indian touch to the poetry I felt.

This was not written with the aim of professional writing rather, you just spoke our your heart. It was blissful reading your write. Perfectly inked, with the right amount of words and appropriate intimacy without any limits.

Great writing. Keep up the good writing.

Blessed be you and your dear friend, for friends are an idol to portray that, you have a love cultivating heart.

Regards
Prodical

[The dark story]

Thanks a lot for this kind and uplifting review!! I hope to this keep up, thanks again!

[prodicallife]

You are welcome.

Regards
Prodical

[Laminators Dubai]

sooooooooooooo sweet and lovely atiba! great^^

[The dark story]

Thanks a lot.

[Prritiy]

a lovely friendship composition, a touching one too. liked it :)

best wishes

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Such a devoted, warm tribute to a friend, nicely worded and beautifully presented, I enjoyed! Very well done.

[The dark story]

thank you so much for this lovely review. It means a lot.

[Latifa]

i really enjoyed reading this one because it reminded my of my best friend

[The dark story]

Wow! I am glad it reminded you of someone special. Thanks for enjoying it.

[Chris]

We learn early on to share our paths... makes their walking less lonely.

[Dr. Wood ?]

TRUE friendship is hard to find but it can be a treasure to keep forever

[The dark story]

Very wisely said. Thanks for coming by and for the encouragement.

[Dr. Wood ?]

merry christmas

[anxia]

This poem is so very supreme cool!!! I am like' wow', 'cool', 'wow'. You have done a commendable job. Love it!

[The dark story]

Hahah…really? Thank you so much for the compliment. Glad you liked it .

[anxia]

For reals i love it :). Just now my bestie visited and i was reflecting on how blessed i am to have true friends like her (though very few they are precious like the rare gems.):)

[The dark story]

I beleived you in the first place.:D.
You're right about that feel. Especially foe me,knowing myself as an aggressive girl,I love the way my freinds accept me. That's what the sub freinsdhip should be…accept your freinds as they are. They are the one who truly understands us.

[anxia]

I agree that friends are the ones that truly understands and that's because they willingly accept us for who we are and as we are and therefore complete the essence of friendship. Right here you say you are an aggressive girl and your friends understand you for that. I am a super reserved person and no one can understand me better than my friends.

[The dark story]

Syper reserved lol…I surmise you let out a part of you thoughts and emotions in your write. So we can grasp a bit of you from them.

I am not open to about those things which troubles me the most. Honestly I am quite pretentious.I smile at times when I am actually feeling too low or just flash the anger so that no one can approach me…just to keep it myself…not even to my freinds. Yet I can never put up that veil in front of my bestie…quite understanding.

[anxia]

Say friends are the best!!!

[The dark story]

Haha…naa freinds are the bestest best!!

[anxia]

Lol truer :P