For you, My friend

 

 

 

                        

or  you, my friend.

 

Distance is in mile

 Yet I can feel your slightest smile

With you the moments are in ecstatic prime

For, truly, your friendship is sublime.

 

I love your seldom stupidity

Mostly your wisdom and serenity

I revere you when you encourage me

Yeah, I’m irked when you “defeat” me.

 

Your writes sparks inspiring inferno

Your thoughts strikes mind with a blow

Your laugh vanishes my tears

Your presence in my dream conquests my fears.

 

I  thank Heaven for this present

For a “priceless bond” , they have sent.

It’s divinity will shine till the end

Thank you so much for being MY FRIeND.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

a tribute to my cutest, "budhdhu-est", best-est of best friend. thank you so much for being a part of my life.

"side by side or miles apart...best friends are always close to heart."

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

so very touchin', & phenomenally realistic! lovely lines here:

"Your laugh vanishes my tears
Your presence in my dream conquests my fears... "

i believe, friendship's one "blessing" in this world that keeps every "relations and relationships" bound with something majestic bond which may only be understood via the thread of heart, undisguised. it even inter-connects the feelings throu' the vibrancy of soul, & reads out those feelings throu' the frequency of mind.

also, i like the point you mentioned above which's 'bout "LAUGH". yeah, what my philosophy says here is, as long as a guy's succeeded to make a gal laugh even when she's being sad or not in a mood to give a damn, their friendship can stay ev'n for life because, "A LAUGH" is what everybody needs when a tuft of "smiles" seems to be stumbled around. very intriguing poetry or a tribute you treasured your "budhdhu-est" with. nice imagery here.

[Akashi]

Anyone would be lucky to be a friend of a sweet person like you.

[The dark story]

Aww…that is so sweet of you Akashi. By the way, I am not as nice as my friend. Thanks for reading it and leaving lovely review.
Best Wishes!!

[Akashi]

You're welcome. :)

[khalid]

very nicely poem. really friendship is the greatest gift a person would have. a sincere friend can never be replaced..i love the poem from all the aspects really..

[The dark story]

True freinds are rare …that is why they are so precious. Glad you loved it. Thanks a tonne!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

A wonderful poem. You are blessed with such friendship...
I agree. Miles apart...best friends are always close to the heart.
Well-penned.

[The dark story]

Anyone will be defnitely be blissful to find a true caring friend. Especially who understands them and accept the way they are. That's what freindship sghould be like I beleive…accept them as they are. Gladyou liked it. Thanks a lot.:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome.

[Leona Cieri]

Very sweet poem; I really liked it :)
My favourite lines were the beginning two:
"Distance is in mile
Yet I can feel your slightest smile"
And,
"Your laugh vanishes my tears
Your presence in my dream conquests my fears."
People are able connect to this as I have, it just shows how you captured how many of us feel the same way about our friends ^^ Or even what we hope to find in a friend.
Very nice work!

[The dark story]

Wow…I liked the way you have dug out its meaning. Loves your perception. Thabks a lot for buying your time and reading it.

[ayosonolowo]

Well rythm, nicely done, defeating idea, how i wish i could be good as you.

[The dark story]

You are 50 times better than me. Thanks a lot for the encouragement. Best wishes.

[Saumya]

oh..that was sooo sweet Atiba, i seriously didn't realized when i stopped reading this...:)
this is exactly the same i feel about my friends, and they too for me...:) i could clearly and completely relate with every word of this really sweet write:)

very well done dear:)
best wishes
saumya:)

[The dark story]

i guess people most of the people might relate to it. glad you read it and left uplifting review.

[Saumya]

youre welcome dear:)

[Pax]

ahh, this is actually touching... the bond of friendship always surpass time and distance... a friend to me is like family... priceless indeed...

well expressed my friend...
keep it up!

[The dark story]

thanks a lot.

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
Actually I had heard the comparison between a friend and a true friend. And they make all the difference in the world,

It's the times we're so crazy that people think we're high.
It's the times we laugh so hard, we can't help but cry.
It's all the inside jokes and the 'remember whens.'
those are all the reasons that we're best friends !

Here's wishing you the best and strongest of friendships for your future, Atiba, wherever they may be and wherever your heart may take you. ♥

[The dark story]

thanks for sharing those beautiful lines. and thanks a lot.:)

[dw817]

Stay strong and never travel alone into unknown territories. Take care ... :7

[TL Boehm]

a great poem for your friend!

[Jack Buckner]

Beautiful write! You are very talented!

[The dark story]

wow...thanks for the uplifting review.:)