For you, My friend

For you, My friend

A Poem by The dark story

 

 

 

                        

or  you, my friend.

 

Distance is in mile

 Yet I can feel your slightest smile

With you the moments are in ecstatic prime

For, truly, your friendship is sublime.

 

I love your seldom stupidity

Mostly your wisdom and serenity

I revere you when you encourage me

Yeah, I’m irked when you “defeat” me.

 

Your writes sparks inspiring inferno

Your thoughts strikes mind with a blow

Your laugh vanishes my tears

Your presence in my dream conquests my fears.

 

I  thank Heaven for this present

For a “priceless bond” , they have sent.

It’s divinity will shine till the end

Thank you so much for being MY FRIeND.

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2013 The dark story



Author's Note

The dark story
a tribute to my cutest, "budhdhu-est", best-est of best friend. thank you so much for being a part of my life.

"side by side or miles apart...best friends are always close to heart."

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so very touchin', & phenomenally realistic! lovely lines here:

"Your laugh vanishes my tears
Your presence in my dream conquests my fears... "

i believe, friendship's one "blessing" in this world that keeps every "relations and relationships" bound with something majestic bond which may only be understood via the thread of heart, undisguised. it even inter-connects the feelings throu' the vibrancy of soul, & reads out those feelings throu' the frequency of mind.

also, i like the point you mentioned above which's 'bout "LAUGH". yeah, what my philosophy says here is, as long as a guy's succeeded to make a gal laugh even when she's being sad or not in a mood to give a damn, their friendship can stay ev'n for life because, "A LAUGH" is what everybody needs when a tuft of "smiles" seems to be stumbled around. very intriguing poetry or a tribute you treasured your "budhdhu-est" with. nice imagery here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Anyone would be lucky to be a friend of a sweet person like you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

4 Years Ago

Aww…that is so sweet of you Akashi. By the way, I am not as nice as my friend. Thanks for reading .. read more
Akashi

4 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
very nicely poem. really friendship is the greatest gift a person would have. a sincere friend can never be replaced..i love the poem from all the aspects really..

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

4 Years Ago

True freinds are rare …that is why they are so precious. Glad you loved it. Thanks a tonne!
A wonderful poem. You are blessed with such friendship...
I agree. Miles apart...best friends are always close to the heart.
Well-penned.

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

4 Years Ago

Anyone will be defnitely be blissful to find a true caring friend. Especially who understands them a.. read more
Dhaye

4 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Very sweet poem; I really liked it :)
My favourite lines were the beginning two:
"Distance is in mile
Yet I can feel your slightest smile"
And,
"Your laugh vanishes my tears
Your presence in my dream conquests my fears."
People are able connect to this as I have, it just shows how you captured how many of us feel the same way about our friends ^^ Or even what we hope to find in a friend.
Very nice work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The dark story

4 Years Ago

Wow…I liked the way you have dug out its meaning. Loves your perception. Thabks a lot for buying y.. read more
Well rythm, nicely done, defeating idea, how i wish i could be good as you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

4 Years Ago

You are 50 times better than me. Thanks a lot for the encouragement. Best wishes.
oh..that was sooo sweet Atiba, i seriously didn't realized when i stopped reading this...:)
this is exactly the same i feel about my friends, and they too for me...:) i could clearly and completely relate with every word of this really sweet write:)

very well done dear:)
best wishes
saumya:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The dark story

4 Years Ago

i guess people most of the people might relate to it. glad you read it and left uplifting review.
Saumya

4 Years Ago

youre welcome dear:)
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Pax
ahh, this is actually touching... the bond of friendship always surpass time and distance... a friend to me is like family... priceless indeed...

well expressed my friend...
keep it up!

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

4 Years Ago

thanks a lot.
⊰ℛℛ⊱
Actually I had heard the comparison between a friend and a true friend. And they make all the difference in the world,

It's the times we're so crazy that people think we're high.
It's the times we laugh so hard, we can't help but cry.
It's all the inside jokes and the 'remember whens.'
those are all the reasons that we're best friends !

Here's wishing you the best and strongest of friendships for your future, Atiba, wherever they may be and wherever your heart may take you. ♥


Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

4 Years Ago

thanks for sharing those beautiful lines. and thanks a lot.:)
dw817

4 Years Ago

Stay strong and never travel alone into unknown territories. Take care ... :7
a great poem for your friend!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Beautiful write! You are very talented!

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

4 Years Ago

wow...thanks for the uplifting review.:)

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