For you, My friend

For you, My friend

A Poem by The dark story

 

 

 

                        

or  you, my friend.

 

Distance is in mile

 Yet I can feel your slightest smile

With you the moments are in ecstatic prime

For, truly, your friendship is sublime.

 

I love your seldom stupidity

Mostly your wisdom and serenity

I revere you when you encourage me

Yeah, I’m irked when you “defeat” me.

 

Your writes sparks inspiring inferno

Your thoughts strikes mind with a blow

Your laugh vanishes my tears

Your presence in my dream conquests my fears.

 

I  thank Heaven for this present

For a “priceless bond” , they have sent.

It’s divinity will shine till the end

Thank you so much for being MY FRIeND.

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2013 The dark story



Author's Note

The dark story
a tribute to my cutest, "budhdhu-est", best-est of best friend. thank you so much for being a part of my life.

"side by side or miles apart...best friends are always close to heart."

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so very touchin', & phenomenally realistic! lovely lines here:

"Your laugh vanishes my tears
Your presence in my dream conquests my fears... "

i believe, friendship's one "blessing" in this world that keeps every "relations and relationships" bound with something majestic bond which may only be understood via the thread of heart, undisguised. it even inter-connects the feelings throu' the vibrancy of soul, & reads out those feelings throu' the frequency of mind.

also, i like the point you mentioned above which's 'bout "LAUGH". yeah, what my philosophy says here is, as long as a guy's succeeded to make a gal laugh even when she's being sad or not in a mood to give a damn, their friendship can stay ev'n for life because, "A LAUGH" is what everybody needs when a tuft of "smiles" seems to be stumbled around. very intriguing poetry or a tribute you treasured your "budhdhu-est" with. nice imagery here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Another good write! An entertaining read! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

Posted 4 Years Ago


I revere you when you encourage me
Yeah, I’m irked when you “defeat” me.

Fine detailing has made the write full of brilliance :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

4 Years Ago

thanks for buying time and reading it.
Wow. Very well rhymed and melodic as if you are composing a song to your cutest friend ...That was great...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

4 Years Ago

thanks a lot.
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

My pleasur...Any time...:)
Thank you for the beautiful and positive tribute for a friend. A wise person recognize his true friends. A excellent poem and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


The dark story

4 Years Ago

thanks for the read.

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