Into the Forest of my thought

Into the forest of my thought
The fire burning bright.
The flame dancing against
The darkness of my mind.

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

I live on the edge of a forest, with the call of owls and ravens always lingering. Your words took me there, into this forest of your mind, this place that calls you deeper into the darkness, the secret places of your soul, and even there one finds a bright, wild fire burning, warming the world. So beautiful. xo

[Sami Khalil]

Whoa. I love this. Short but one that speaks volumes. Very talented....::::))))

[The dark story]

Thank you so much :D

[Sami Khalil]

::::)))))))

[tanmay7551]

'Into the forest of my thought', Quite a catchy and sensible title!
Liked it, Do you mind if I use it for my own work ?

[The dark story]

Thanks for the read :)
How do u intend to use it ?

[tanmay7551]

In the body of the poetry

[The dark story]

U wanna use the title...extended into a poem

[The dark story]

I won't mind. :)

[tanmay7551]

Thank you so much :)

[YanZeros]

the Mind is blank... Until the light bulb lit... Ding! I got an idea! :) nicely written Atiba Sheikh lovin' it!

[The dark story]

Hahaha now that is a wonderful thought given to it! Glad you loved it. So happy to know that :)

[YanZeros]

I so can relate to this poem! Sometimes when we want to do something or to create something our mind will always went out blank or start from a blank canvass. Our fiery passion drives us to explore more or dig deeper inside our thoughts. The mind will begin to stack all those information all those abstract creations. Like its dancing lights transmitting those ideas into fruition.

[The dark story]

Bravo! *clapping* that's brilliant! My thought was quite similar to the one you have just expressed. It's just that sometimes, the conflict that ravages my mind makes it hard. Yet, the flame of the Art finds it way out to the canvass.

[YanZeros]

Yes Indeed! Atiba Sheikh! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Short..but intresting to read

[Nessly]

Oh, I like this! It's like a camping scene taking place inside one's mind. Maybe the darkness you mention relates to those ghost stories people often tell while sitting around a campfire. Great Idea. An interesting write.

[The dark story]

Wow! That is an amazing and wonderful picture you have painted. Thank you so much :)

[Nessly]

Awe, you're welcome. You're the artist here; I'm merely the viewer/reader. :)

[The dark story]

The readers paint their own world of interpretation with the given words. They are the artist themselves.

[Sikandar Khan]

i think u have fever take medicine hehehehe

[The dark story]

Haha..i have headache actually. Thankfully no fever!

[Sikandar Khan]

ohhh so take pain killer for headache

[The dark story]

I don't take pain killer

[Sikandar Khan]

okkk try to hit your face with walls or hammer itsss goood way to get free of headache hehehehehe dont ,mind

[The dark story]

I am too lazy to do that. Thanks for the suggestion though.

[Sikandar Khan]

okkk Give Me A Chance I Can Hit hard ur head with wall or hammer.....

[Sikandar Khan]

Sorry I just joking dont mind

[The dark story]

Lol ikr. Don't worry

[Sikandar Khan]

U cant mind because u have no mind hehehedheeh

[The dark story]

Hmm Are u high??

[Sikandar Khan]

What does high mean?

[Relic]

hahahahaha