Into the Forest of my thought

Into the Forest of my thought

A Poem by The dark story

Into the forest of my thought
The fire burning bright.
The flame dancing against
The darkness of my mind.

© 2016 The dark story



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I live on the edge of a forest, with the call of owls and ravens always lingering. Your words took me there, into this forest of your mind, this place that calls you deeper into the darkness, the secret places of your soul, and even there one finds a bright, wild fire burning, warming the world. So beautiful. xo

Posted 10 Months Ago


Whoa. I love this. Short but one that speaks volumes. Very talented....::::))))

Posted 11 Months Ago


The dark story

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much :D
Sami Khalil

11 Months Ago

::::)))))))
'Into the forest of my thought', Quite a catchy and sensible title!
Liked it, Do you mind if I use it for my own work ?



Posted 11 Months Ago


The dark story

11 Months Ago

U wanna use the title...extended into a poem
The dark story

11 Months Ago

I won't mind. :)
tanmay7551

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
the Mind is blank... Until the light bulb lit... Ding! I got an idea! :) nicely written Atiba Sheikh lovin' it!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YanZeros

11 Months Ago

I so can relate to this poem! Sometimes when we want to do something or to create something our mind.. read more
The dark story

11 Months Ago

Bravo! *clapping* that's brilliant! My thought was quite similar to the one you have just expressed... read more
YanZeros

11 Months Ago

Yes Indeed! Atiba Sheikh! :)
Short..but intresting to read

Posted 11 Months Ago


Oh, I like this! It's like a camping scene taking place inside one's mind. Maybe the darkness you mention relates to those ghost stories people often tell while sitting around a campfire. Great Idea. An interesting write.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The dark story

11 Months Ago

Wow! That is an amazing and wonderful picture you have painted. Thank you so much :)
Nessly

11 Months Ago

Awe, you're welcome. You're the artist here; I'm merely the viewer/reader. :)
The dark story

11 Months Ago

The readers paint their own world of interpretation with the given words. They are the artist themse.. read more
i think u have fever take medicine hehehehe

Posted 11 Months Ago


The dark story

11 Months Ago

Hmm Are u high??
Sikandar Khan

11 Months Ago

What does high mean?
Relic

11 Months Ago

hahahahaha

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Added on December 7, 2016
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The dark story

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Re-starting the journey that I have once left. It feels good to be back here- a haven of creation and stupendous imagination. Yo. To be honest, I don't know myself so much. My self-awareness test o.. more..

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