My Best Friend’s Memories

My Best Friend’s Memories

A Poem by The dark story
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this one is dedicated to my bestest best friend.....

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My Best Friend’s Memories

 

I still remember the moment when we first crossed our paths,

The priceless thing that I could have ever achieved,

Is you my dearest heart.

 

You know how much I craved for you,

for you are my soul and heart.

That’s why I can never exist without you

But I would be a mere lifeless block.

 

I remember the time we used to laugh together.

Oh!! Your smile!

They baptize me with life.

I remember you used to pour all your advices on me.

Oh!! Your words!

They blossom my heart..

 

But now, it’s hard for me to live like before,

because now…I’m without my heart and soul.

It’s mirthful how fate had decided to separate us apart.

 

The distance between us is just in thousands kilometers

But it seems like a light year to me..

 

Oh!! How long I have to wait to see

Your endearing smile,

to take a glimpse of your mesmerizing eyes.

 

O my dearest friend…

All I have is just your memories within me

Which are keeping me alive,

Until the time we meet under the bright shade of sunshine.

 

 

 

 

© 2012 The dark story


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when we first crossed one another's paths
is to have you dearest to my heart
the distance between us is measured in kilometers
but it feels like many light years away
until the time we meet again
under the bright shade of sunlight

it is a good poem but this is what i would change

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A wonderful tribute to your friend, I kind of relate with this poem. Good one

Posted 10 Years Ago


people are a addiction and friends... are friends... no mattrr who they are where they are how they are.... they never exit your mind

Posted 11 Years Ago


The dark story

11 Years Ago

sumtimes...hey i'm salways right..always.:P :P :P..samjhe babidi:P
The dark story

11 Years Ago

sumtimes...hey i'm salways right..always.:P :P :P..samjhe babidi:P
Muhammad Qasim

11 Years Ago

dekho...phr se glt 18 :p :p hehe
A heartfelt sweet poem that shows your kind loving heart and I can feel the music of it too. You write beautifully dear poetess. Keep on shinning .

Posted 11 Years Ago


The dark story

11 Years Ago

THanks for your uplifting reviews......
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome. My pleasure.
That was a very honest and beautiful piece. Every person enters in our life, because of a reason, and when the purpose is over, they silently leave us. It doesn't mean that they are bad, it just means that their role in our life is over.
The poem started out perfectly, but there were some parts of it, that could be re-framed.
For eg, The distance between us is just in thousands kilometers
But it seems like a light year to me.. - should be edited.

The ending could be delivered in a better way, something that will leave an impact, an everlasting one. Rest it is very well penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The dark story

11 Years Ago

thanks for the advice..so you pointed out that line..can i say it like this."light years away"...and.. read more
What a beautiful lyric voice that shares this precious friendship... and like your world is a garden, your friend came like raindrops and sunshine to bring you to life! Mingled with the bittersweet words of longing, you have written a wondrous dedication to your best friend...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very sweet poem, I really liked the line "The distance between us is just in thousands kilometers

But it seems like a light year to me.." because I can relate to it the most, having to move around a lot... but very nice poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The dark story

11 Years Ago

i am so happy you like it.thanks for your kind reviews
"They baptize me with life." That right there is my favorite line in this whole poem. I love how clear the voice is in this work. It was really easy for me to feel the love for your friend in this work. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The dark story

11 Years Ago

thank you so much.i am so glad you like it.......
Oh! Perfectly expressed...This poem of all days to read... My own bff is moving away tomorrow..and I shall miss her with all my being...

Posted 11 Years Ago


The dark story

11 Years Ago

awwww....but u know she hasn't read it...but that's what best friend r..u don't hv to tell them abou.. read more

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