Jumbled Jigsaw

Jumbled Jigsaw

A Poem by audacious

After apple's arose abruptly and

Birds began bending backwards,

Cautiously counting countless cackles.

Death demeans depth doubts downwards.

Everything embeds eggshell edges

Faintly fair. Familiar faces frown

Grief. Gentle generosity gallops

Harshly, harboring handyman habits.

Ideal identities illustrate illegal

Jokes, justifying joyful Jazz.  

Killings kept keenly kind knock  

Loudly like lenient lions

Mastering mountainous madness.

Nails nip narrowly nearby.

Owls obey October offensively,

Painters panic parents patiently.

Qualifications quarrel quickly, quietly.

Rambunctious races rally raw,

So saviors scale sadness.

Talents, talks, talons, tapes,

Unite under umbrellas unified

Vastly. Very vile video views

Whereabout who win with

Xag. X-rayed Xiphias’ x-factors

Yawn yearly, yet yellow

Zebras zone zero zealously.


© 2017 audacious

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A wonderful coming together of words that bring about the uniqueness of life and existence where there is so much and so many different things out there to notice and appreciate and sometimes we don’t look deep enough to see how much there is to see- amazing thoughts and see out🌹

Posted 10 Months Ago

That's so cool! I love how you weave the words together to almost make sense, but not quite.

Posted 1 Year Ago

The words clash and are a bit too unrelated for me. I get the idea but...

Posted 1 Year Ago

A poem like this is hard to pull off.....but I think you've succeeded in it. It's fantastically absurd, and just filled with cryptic nonsense that makes us go WTF, but at the same time Holy Cow! A very Seussian feat! B, C, H, I, M, N, S, and T are my faves. T in particular for its marvellous use of assonance. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on November 20, 2017
Last Updated on November 20, 2017




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