Reeling Revelation

Reeling Revelation

A Poem by audacious

What is a love merely masked by friendly hugs
Or by words that are put off until later?

What are opportunities regarding these things
And how does one go about forgetting (un)forgettable flings that (do)n’t matter?

To one, it’s there, an easy solution, just move on, and never turn back.
To the other however, it’s more than a mere quote that seems to keep them from reaching the track

So while one lives, the other one dies
A slow and painful death,
Until she wakes up one night, in the midst of nothing
And realizes everyone else has been quite right.

© 2018 audacious



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The sadness of not being true to ourselves and fearing the unknown leaves one lonely and the other one lost- sad reality of fear - love it🌹

Posted 2 Months Ago


Some people settle all their lives - because they WANT... always want, and are soooo afraid if they haven't.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wow. I love this. I especially like the last two lines.

Until she wakes up one night, in the midst of nothing
And realizes everyone else has been quite right.

Wonderful read.

Posted 4 Months Ago


I like the rhythym of it, it flows nicely.
Where do you get inspiration for all of these amazing poems??

Posted 5 Months Ago


audacious

5 Months Ago

Something that I hope everyone gets to experience at least once in their lifetime

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Added on December 1, 2017
Last Updated on March 9, 2018

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