tears

teares are falling down my face

These are tears of heartbrake

Tears of lonyness

tears of love

Tears of hate

Tears of sorrow

Tears of anger

Tears or regret tears of rejection

there tears every emotion

 

Reviews

[joanofbooke]

i love this poem it really amazes me how even though it is simple it still shocks

[NeverSurrender]

Nice and simple. Good poem that shows potential. Do try to spell check and re-read before submitting though. Because leaving it messy takes away some of it's strength..

But keep it up :)

N.S.

[JustWantLove]

Expressing your emotions is the way to understand your own soul and self; continue to write with your heart, and the rest will align!

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem can be very good. Need to read a loud and check the flow of the poem. Tears are the release of a heart break.
Coyote

[SM Davis]

Nice expression. Your format is a bit ... unkempt i.e. capatalizing of some but not all first words of each line...spelling...etc. However, for a simple expression this is a good start.

[..R.I.P..]

Needs some cleaning up, but other than that it's really good. Nice write.
~Kat