Wounds

Wounds

A Poem by Avinash
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What went wrong

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Wounds left open
Ignored, unattended
devoid of any attention
for long
Invite disease
what went wrong
now you ask
with the world
start reading
from the beginning

© 2016 Avinash



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Interesting poem...wounds do indeed invite disease and it is important to look back from the beginning...there is usually a trigger point, in childhood, more often than not, that if we can tap into, then our wounds become easier to understand thus easier to accept and in that light, easier to heal...though healing can take a lifetime...there is so much to be said here but what I like is the message that there is a time to go back to and there is a chance to find it and heal, albeit however slowly ♥

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

1 Year Ago

Thank you love. Your words are remedial in nature and capable of healing even the most wounded.



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Being injured.. okay.. but not doing anything about it.. not okay.. we need to introspect & see from where it all started.. Thoughtful dear :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


THIS IS MY FAVORITE POEM ON THIS PLATFORM SO FAR.
HOW CAPTIVATING AND HOW HAMMERING

Posted 9 Months Ago


If only everyone could read this poem! A simple yet complex poem with volumes of depth. Well written!
Tabby

Posted 1 Year Ago


Avinash

1 Year Ago

Thanks Tabby for your kindness.
More than a poet, you are a doctor of nature. A message of truth. All have their origins and must know them. All invite disease, if left unattended, and we must tackle them. Excellent. ....::::)))))

Posted 1 Year Ago


Avinash

1 Year Ago

Thanks Sami my friend.
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome. ...::::))))
Interesting poem...wounds do indeed invite disease and it is important to look back from the beginning...there is usually a trigger point, in childhood, more often than not, that if we can tap into, then our wounds become easier to understand thus easier to accept and in that light, easier to heal...though healing can take a lifetime...there is so much to be said here but what I like is the message that there is a time to go back to and there is a chance to find it and heal, albeit however slowly ♥

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

1 Year Ago

Thank you love. Your words are remedial in nature and capable of healing even the most wounded.
Very true Avinash bhai, unattended wounds invite diseases, a powerful write

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avinash

1 Year Ago

Thanks Hardeep bhai. Hope you are doing good. Lately I was involved in some theater activities, so w.. read more

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Added on November 5, 2016
Last Updated on November 5, 2016
Tags: world, life, wounds, healing

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Avinash
Avinash

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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