A pimp and a priest

A pimp and a priest

A Poem by Avinash
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Is there any difference?

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A pimp and a priest
Something both promise
Deep within your heart
You know for sure
you don't deserve
But still go for anyways



© 2017 Avinash



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This is bloody fantastic. Thanks for sharing such a clever write. Brilliant title also my friend

Posted 3 Months Ago


"A pimp and a priest
Something both promise
Deep within your heart
You know for sure
you don't deserve
But still go for anyways"

Posted 8 Months Ago


Brilliant thought!
:)

Keep writing!

Posted 10 Months Ago


One is promising sexual fulfillment and the other spiritual one. One promise is quick and fast and the other is promising eternity with or without God. Both come with a price and degrees of entitlement. I like this . Very good.You made me think....:).................

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like the witty criticism you offer here, both calling out certain individuals for what often seem like empty promises.

The wise do tend to find the answers that both these fallible individuals fail to provide....:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Avinash

1 Year Ago

Your insights are deeply appreciated.
Character is something that is a fine balance of similarities sometimes, what I like here is the question also...I would say there is a world of difference and yet within one world so there is no difference, both pushing and selling...morals are an individual thing so the individual purchasing should always follow their heart, I only hope the heart can direct them away from the corruption both the chosen forms of characters have here :) ♥

Posted 1 Year Ago


Avinash

1 Year Ago

Thanks Love your kind review.

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Avinash
Avinash

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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