Bhagirathi - Who will bring her back

Bhagirathi - Who will bring her back

A Poem by Avinash
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In times forgotten 
Sagara was the mightiest King
to prove he did yagya called ashwamedha
he released the horse to claim all lands
nobody would stop him or they'd lose their hands
until it was stolen by Indra, the deciever
Sagara was furious looking for its captor
he called a thousand sons to ravage every corner
forests were chopped, mountains raised
lands made barren, no animals nor rain
the carnage went on 'til the last drop was gone
but they met their fate, turned to ashes
souls in flames by a Saint not allowed to meditate
everything dried, tears not come when children cried
death was the only home
Bhagirath knew the sins of his Fathers
penanced them to Brahma, the Creator
"Only Ganga, river from heaven
can save the earthern 
but earth is weak
Shiva's help you should seek"
so Shiva asked her to fall on his head and closed his locks
she feel slow, flowed to mountains and rocks
bringing life 
seeds and saplings
quenching the living
redeeming the dead
he called her Bhagirathi, they say
human greed has made her diseased
chances of suvival are bleak
now whose help should we seek?

© 2017 Avinash



Author's Note

Avinash
An animation is made on this poem recited by Poppy Ruth Silver and with the other members of Puppets of God. Do share it if you like it.
https://www.facebook.com/Rally4Rivers/videos/299417977205576/?hc_ref=ARQhd35ZdUlbi2IY0RDS-xgtvCnilPgkYWpXK9VrlyilA9ZF-O1cRBo8kCICh3B6fVs&pnref=story

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Epic in a poem...
The charisma of the saga is well reflecting off your poem!
Thanks for sharing this work.
And the question with which you signed off still hasn't got an answer.


Posted 1 Week Ago


I watched the video. An amazing collaboration and a great reading by our beloved poet Poppy. You all are creative...:).............

Posted 1 Month Ago


Avinash

1 Month Ago

Thank you Sami for all your support and love.
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

You are welcome...:)...................
I am a huge fan of mythology. I always love reading anything related to it. The above poem is very beautifully written. Animation is also great. May Ganga be respected forever...

Posted 1 Month Ago


Avinash

1 Month Ago

Thank you Swetha for your kind words
I am proud to be a part of this, may Ganga forever be fertile and respected ♥

Posted 1 Month Ago


Avinash

1 Month Ago

Your contribution uplifted the work to new heights. So should everyone.

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Added on September 4, 2017
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Tags: Rallyforrivers, Ganga, Bhagirathi, Rivers

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Avinash
Avinash

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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