I've set me free

Black is the darkness,

It overwhelms me,

Seeps inside,

I can’t hide,

I can’t run,

And I fear its only just begun,

Red,

Blood red,

 just beneath the skin,

A gift flowing from within,

I won’t tear it,

It’s too hard to repair it,

I will not bleed,

I’ll believe,

Set myself free,

Open my eyes to this sky blue dream,

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful. :)

[Eileenws]

Nice job of using all the colors. There is optimism in this poem which I like. Nice job.

[chaotic katie]

thank you =)

[Death Girl]

I love it. I like how you used the colors. Amazing write keep up the good work.

[Cookie]

I love this. This puts into words something I've felt many times. It's very good.

[chaotic katie]

thank you