Bound

I don't want to be bound,

I want to hear a new sound,

angels singing don't you cry,

a sweet and soothing lullaby,

i don't want to shed more tears,

i want to fly away,

somewhere free of fears,

I want to feel the sun,

when it was warm on my face,

because maybe in heaven,

I won't be a disgrace.

Reviews

[B-poet]

Very eloquent, inspiring, an a appropriate message every hearty soul should take heed to. Great write here. :)

[chaotic katie]

thank you

[InsanityWriter]

So sad and so beautiful... Those last two lines have such impact... *hugs* You're not a disgrace. :)

[chaotic katie]

awe thanks :3 such nice people on writers

[Notsoloud]

Your not as alone as you feel. Keep writing and understand your self worth. You would be amazed about how awesome it is to understand the person you are.

[Death Girl]

You are not a disgrace no matter what people say. I love this piece it is very relatable. keep up the great work.

[Chloe]

Everyone, even the seemingly happiest of people, have felt this way at some point or another in their lifetime. A lot of people have become so close to falling off an edge to rocks below, that we don't even realize it. Sometimes all people need is to be known; that they have worth. That they matter to someone. Anyone. Maybe this is a dark view on this poem. It probably seems like it. But it is a realistic one on real life. Or at least mine. Stay strong!

[chaotic katie]

thanks :)

[Alexander Rodgers]

Ah, don't we all? Very relatable and realistic, great work. Kind of short, but there's nothing wrong with short haha

[chaotic katie]

haha matches how short i am, thanks for the feedback!

[Alexander Rodgers]

Anytime haha

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I can understand this feeling. Everyone wants to feel like they belong and are wanted, so often we don't feel that here and we long for something better. I like how it's short and simple and i like the flow of the words.

Good Job

[chaotic katie]

thank you :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome ^^