Black Sheep

Black Sheep

A Poem by chaotic katie

No matter what I do or say,

They still push me away,

I look in on their happy little scene,

I won’t be included,

Not even in my dreams,

I’ve tried long enough,

Just to get their attention,

But they always have something better to mention,

Yes,

I’m the black sheep,

You won’t say it but I know,

Want me to be an act,

In your perfect little show,

Sorry,

That’s not me,

I’m just you’re little black sheep.

© 2013 chaotic katie


Author's Note

chaotic katie
Wrote this while listening to five finger death punch (never enough) so it kinda has the same story. its about my dads side of the family. I'm really just an outcast to them. Obvoiusly i don't care but heres a piece i wrote out of music and boredum.... enjoy

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I love the symbolism I under stained how it is to be the black sheep it is very meaningful awesome job


Posted 10 Years Ago


its good to not confirm with the poisonous customs of a group or a society of people being eccentric and finding your own way even if it means being shunned is better than selling your soul to conformity

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

Thanks!
'There is always that one' as they say. Idiots, we're unique, its fun being the black sheep :)
I like this write, as it had so much meaning to me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thank you glad you liked it
Perfectly expressed. :) Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thank you
Sheep are cute
and Black is the in thing in color
so stick to your intuition
to bring it to its logical fruition
this spells 'woot' and its yours to keep!

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thanks
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

10 Years Ago

ok
So i read this and i loved it, It has a big effect an meaning behind it to me. I guess some word's speak to other's differently. It's intense how this poem sounds like my problems with others in my life, i have had some of the same thing's similar. So Thank you for posting an amazing bit of writing.. as far as being the "troubled" son and having problems and as far as being a black sheep always being used for someones ends.. so again great poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thank you i'm really glad you enjoyed it!
We're a herd of black sheep, my dear :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

:)
I love this!

Posted 10 Years Ago


i like this poem and i can relate to you as far as the whole family outcast thing its the same way with me for both sides of my family i don't really fit in with any of them. i enjoyed this poem and the fact that you were listening to five finger death punch was even better amazing band and amazing poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thanks i'm really glad you like it!
Alexis Markum

10 Years Ago

no problem
It's interesting when you actually notice that you're a black sheep in reality. Not being like everyone else in the herd going "blah, blah, blah, blah in life". lol Great write one of your best to date. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thank you :)

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Added on May 27, 2013
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chaotic katie
chaotic katie

Canton, OH



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Greetings darling writers, allow me to explain a bit about myself. I started writing when I was 13 and fell in love with it. Over the years I have won 2 awards for it. I keep most of my old works pos.. more..

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