Words

distractions obviously didn't work

I never did understand the blasphemy of childhood. They say that words will never hurt you when in fact it is words that hurt one the most. Words mock and tease and pierce with vicious laughter. Words form thoughts and opinions that cause people to judge and hate and claim they are right. Words cause people to tear themselves from those who they love. Words start wars. Words are a disease to witch there is no cure.

Reviews

[Death Girl]

You are so right with this. It is so true. Goog job and keep up the good work.

[beautiful dreamer]

Wow nice done seein im watching a thousand words

[chaotic katie]

thanks for the feedback. Trying something new with this one. It strikes me more as a piece I would perform in drama class so I was hesitant to call it a poem.

[beautiful dreamer]

Yeah lol. I love it

[chaotic katie]

thank you!

[beautiful dreamer]

Your welcome :)

[unbrakable fragile gir..]

sometimes words hurts more then physical pain and they leave long lasting marks they effect more thing and people and you explain that in this poem but in a way were your not just saying it your really putting meaning in it lovely job

[chaotic katie]

thanks, I was trying a bit of a new style.

[unbrakable fragile girl]

your really good at poetry and writing

[chaotic katie]

well it all comes with practice. I've been writing since I was thirteen and i'll be seventeen in july so I guess what they say is true.

[unbrakable fragile girl]

nice ill keep on writing maybe ill get good at it

[chaotic katie]

you already are! You express yourself with words and enjoy doing it. I call that perfection in a writer.

[unbrakable fragile girl]

well thank very very much to you to

[chaotic katie]

anytime!

[B-poet]

A great point you've made here regarding how words affect people. Some words are meant to build people up while others are meant to tear someone down. Nice work. An intriguing read. :)