This Monster i call me

This Monster i call me

A Poem by chaotic katie

I hate myself,

The words I say,

Just pushes everyone away,

I look in the mirror,

And keep on pouring tears,

And with stinging eyes I see,

This monster I call me.

© 2013 chaotic katie


Author's Note

chaotic katie
I feel like I just lost everything

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In my day, this is what we would call 'grabbing the horns and bring the steer to tears'. The fact there is a personal spin makes it more and more interesting on the psychological level, keep up the work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this! So short but really effective, great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thank you so much for the feedback
Write to vent...always release back it into the wild, where it comes from...heal, move on and improve.
Words have power and I love that they heal and save.

Thanks for sharing a piece of your world.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You are not a monster. I LOVE you sis you know I always say sometimes but I ways LOVE yous

Posted 10 Years Ago


Quite a philosophical piece and a strong one. Well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thanks for the feedback!
You haven't lost everything. I'll be here to help you get it all back. The poem was great. I love the use of words and the way it all expresses what you feel (though I probably had something to do with that, which I'm sorry for). Great poem, baby.

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

Its not exactly you...
Y'know, I sometimes wonder what I would do if a monster was all that I was. And I decided that if I was a complete monster, I might as well be the best monster I could be. And that thought is just one that helps me realise that I'm not yet a complete monster, because when I think of flowing with it, I see I have so much to lose.
Monstrous moments will always be there, loyally thrashing you, but extremes are good reminders of what it is to be balanced.
The mirror stare-down is a very relatable image. We all belong where the wild things are ;)

- Guilt

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the feedback!
When all is lost...Have a drink, and a little think, then go out there and gain everything all back!
Lifes a b***h, but you can handle her, even when yuo think you cant.
I very much like your words, there is a deep sadness. Chin up love, it will get better

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

thank you!
I hope you can get it all back and I really enjoyed your poem it really shows your view on your self very nice I wouldn't call you a monster because you helped me out a lot great job and keep your head up

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

awe thank you for the kind review!
 unbrakable fragile girl

10 Years Ago

anytime:)
When we lose everything, we are in every position to gain everything.

Posted 10 Years Ago


chaotic katie

10 Years Ago

very true! thanks for the feedback elliot!

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chaotic katie
chaotic katie

Canton, OH



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Greetings darling writers, allow me to explain a bit about myself. I started writing when I was 13 and fell in love with it. Over the years I have won 2 awards for it. I keep most of my old works pos.. more..

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