Another Winter's Monday

Another Winter's Monday

A Poem by John Jackson (El Juero)
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for a contest honoring Pablo Neruda

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On a gray Sunday afternoon,
solid cloud unburdened it's snow,
in apparently endless torrent.

It seems we shovel every day this year.
You and I saying little, quiet but for
the rhythmic scrape of shovel on pavement, 
and the muffled sound of passersby.

I see you, my love, and worry inwardly,
for the snow is heavy and very wet.
Our labor gives me pause and reflection,
reinforcing the togetherness of us.

Your thick, long hair tousled, seductive.
Cheeks blushed the color of Rugosa rose,
I see you again, as if for the first time.

My voice once more fails
to tell you of the wellspring of joy,
and the love I carefully hold for you,
deep within my heart.

© 2012 John Jackson (El Juero)


Author's Note

John Jackson (El Juero)
For Ayla, mi Corazon, mi Amor, mi Vida.

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What a lovely couple...love the photo
This poem was absolutely beautiful...heartfelt...very touching
Can feel the love you have for your wife..love is such a beautiful thing..Now go tell her this and remember to enjoy each other each day. Sometimes nothing is needed to be said and then there are those times when it is needed.
Lovely piece, enjoyed it much

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I hope every other day of the week is as beautiful as this for you both. You've made a winter day a beautiful thing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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What a lovely couple...love the photo
This poem was absolutely beautiful...heartfelt...very touching
Can feel the love you have for your wife..love is such a beautiful thing..Now go tell her this and remember to enjoy each other each day. Sometimes nothing is needed to be said and then there are those times when it is needed.
Lovely piece, enjoyed it much

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Working in harmony with nature gives fire to your lives and enriches our outlook.
This poem showcases a true and deep commitment to both body and soul.


Posted 12 Years Ago


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...
. so beautiful ...
. so lovingly written ...
. like a symphony called love ...
. exquisite poetry ...
. deep and deeply moving ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a sweet poem you have written for your wife John. Make sure you do share with her the joy of finding love with such a lovely, understanding, beautiful woman. Women love hearing things like this. You are blessed! Living life together bonds two people better than anything I know. You deserve it!! Share your expressions of love frequently. Great writing....nizhoni.

Posted 12 Years Ago


a wonderful homage to Neruda and to your Ayla . . . beautiful in every way

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John Jackson (El Juero)
John Jackson (El Juero)

Anchorage, AK



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