Tu Mujhe Mera Humdard Dikhta Hai

Tujhmein har pal kuch naya sa dikhta h
Tu mujhe mera humdard dikhta h

Jis din se tu h mujhe mila
Mera saya bankar hai saath chala
Jab jab andhero ne h pareshan kiya
Teri aankho Ki Roshni ne meri raahon ko Roshan kiya
Tere saamne mera dard kahan tikta h
Kyunki tu hi mujhe mera hamdard dikhta h

Tere bina ab ye zindagi adhuri lage
Tere saath meri har adhuri kahani mujhe Puri lage
Jab jab iss duniya ne sataya mujhe
Teri aawaz ne har pal rahat di mujhe
Mera dil ab apna Haal likhta h
Kahe bina raha na jaye Ki Tujhme mujhe mera hamdard dikhta h....

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Waah!!!..
bahot khoob........
pyaar bhari khoobsurat kavita....
bahot badhaayi....

bahot pasand aayi.....
:)

[Ayushi Beura]

Tumhare kavita mein kuch toh baat hai, jish kadar tumne yeh likha hai tum sacche tarif ki kabil ho...

[Ayushi Sharma]

thankuuuuu so much dear ayushi!!!!!!

[samparks,sam]

too bewafi na karna kabhi mujest
mera dard har wakat rab ko dikhta hai
Tu dekhey na delhe mujey ye teri niyat hai
par hal pal tujmey muje ak Insaan dikhta hai


nice poem

[Ayushi Sharma]

wow!!!!!!!dats wonderful.....u have added nice lines!!!

[Ayushi Sharma]

Thanks for ur review Sam!!