Happy Birthday

Happy Birthday

A Poem by Ayushi Beura

Holy spirit took birth,
cheerful moment for all, 
Propitious situation all around ,
Pleasurable hearts enjoying
Your birthday songs.

Baby born is so cute, 
Influence with warmth, 
Realize the meaning of beauty, 
To adore the face of yours. 
Humming and 
Dancing, 
All are enjoying 
Your birthday songs.

© 2016 Ayushi Beura



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the way you have expressed your views in this creation is very unique....beautiful...i love it..by the way i have also written a poem on the same topic.."happy birthday"

Posted 2 Months Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much!!! Well then I must read it :-) :-) :-)
I love this word game.I make it with my own name or others and also of TEACHER etc.
best b day wish.....

Posted 10 Months Ago


Ayushi Beura

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much:)
fine work..not much expressive still makes things clear


Posted 12 Months Ago


Ayushi Beura

11 Months Ago

Thank you :)
Amazingly expressed. Loved the way you expressed it.

Cheers!!
Singh..

Posted 12 Months Ago


Ayushi Beura

12 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review
Beautiful and hopeful words shared. Good to celebrate a birthday with someone you love. Thank you Ayushi for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Poet.
This is well done. Some people do not get the chance to hold a baby. I give you a 100.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much
Brennon

1 Year Ago

No problemo.
holding the newly born baby is truly a bless.
you have described the was with a nice and wonderful way, specially "To adore the face of yours. "
good job

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Haseo thank you so much
I tried to describe about a new born baby...hope you like it

Posted 1 Year Ago


lovely poem ayushi!!!!!!u have defined the birth of a newborn baby in a lovely way.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ayushi Beura

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much

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