I Am Your Servant

I Am Your Servant

A Poem by {someone:.:unknown}
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just got inspired

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I am your servant, your lover, your wench
away even a mile hence
i will serve you, i will please you
forever to serve you.
i will protect thou and i will die for thee
your love is the only fee
i will protect thee and i will die for thou
tell me to do something i will only ask how?
why never escapes my lips.
warning of death always nips.
they took you away,
and declared that we were not fated.
please do not cry, i will hold on to our flower
i will find you later with all my power
years later i laid my eyes on she, the beauty.
i fell in love.
though you see through eyes of the pure doves,
you ordered me to kill she.
i killed she, but i could not stop crying.
but to stop the tears i see you smiling.
i hold your hands, and not too later,
they came after you.
i do not care if they declare you evil,
because if you are evil then so am i.
your dark blood runs through my veins
take my clothes, and i will take yours.
i am yours, this is one of many chores
run and don't turn back...
they will take me and i'll take your punishment.
to see your smiles and your laughter, is my acknowledgment
i will always love you, my sister, my queen, my flower...


© 2010 {someone:.:unknown}



Author's Note

{someone:.:unknown}
i got inspired by this vid, i know it's really similar and i wanted to write it/ type it because it really is touching i guess and i wanted to put it in a few different words, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijPORQQ4kJw

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great stuff love the end its just perfect! its just a clear yet miss message for those who don't read it. :) I will always chose to be happy but it makes me happier to make others ever happier and this poem just connects me to what I feel in a whole different level. I wouldn't change a word on this, keep up the great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


An awesome piece of writing indeed.....really loved reading it....You have said subtly how Love doesn't care the world, the evil, the society......
''i do not care if they declare you evil,
because if you are evil then so am i.''
'' i'll take your punishment.
to see your smiles and your laughter, is my acknowledgment''
I just loved the poem......:)

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on December 26, 2009
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