No answers

Too many questions and no courage to answer
so much darkness and no match stick to ignite
water getting high,hopes almost dead,
given up doing the same mistake
heart breaking apart, tired of being let down
when the mask wears off scars come on the soul
Sky above me earth below me and fire within me

still each moment feels like a tragedy..

Reviews

[Sue Hart]

I love your work. it says so much. The world fits this at this time. Courage is being beaten down, darkness covers the planet, heart breaking from looking at what has become, and the scars it leaves on all. I want to cry at the truth of this and how your work calls out on both the personal and world wide aspect of it.

[Rida Sarwar]

thank u so much dude :)

[Sue Hart]

I'm from Texas originally and in my day a dude was a city slicker. LOL

[Rida Sarwar]

hahaha Oh no no! I'm from Pakistan and in here dude doesn't mean that! Im really sorry! :P I didn't mean it that way ok? dude just means in a friendly tone right? we are cool? :P

[Sue Hart]

LOL. I wasn't scolding you. The young generation uses it here too. A friendly nick-name. As in pal, buddy, a greeting. I was sharing what it once meant. I think it's great to compare slangs.

[Rida Sarwar]

ok cool :)

[Gedalya]

Actually, I was told that dude meant something entirely different lol

[Johanna]

Really sad, emotional a powerfully written poem. Goodjob! the last line was my favorite.. keep up the great work! :)

[Ahena MK]

water getting high,hopes almost dead,
given up doing the same mistake..
really good ...
ahena :)

[Rida Sarwar]

thank u so much ;)

[Saddam]

when the mask wears off scars come on the soul
Sky above me earth below me and fire within me
wow.....you had penned it very beautyfuly. thanks. loveya.

[Rida Sarwar]

thank u so much

[Saddam]

you are welcome

[Sue Hart]

You are an excellent writer. You say so very much in so few words. That isn't easy. The message here is world wide begging for more sanity and less threats as hope begins to die. I love your work. Keep me on the reading list. Please.

[Rida Sarwar]

thank you and sure I will keep you there you too keep me on your reading list ;)