Gay Cows

Gay Cows

A Poem by Kitten

My heart beats in time with your laughter
- you, laughing -
curled up entwined in my sweat-soaked sheets
I never thought I’d hear that sound
I never thought I could let my guard down
     around you.

© 2008 Kitten


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Kitten
short and sweet, or maybe just realizing.

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Is the word Gay in the title meant as homosexual? If so the poem makes perfect sense.

Sweat soaked sheets etc.

This short sweet self-realization is very effective.

All the best Kitten.

Posted 10 Years Ago


the title is great.... my guess that u have a funny laugh...and thats how u let your guard down to the guy u like :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


You're right; Short and sweet, but it's also realizing as well, so it's all good there. Just one thing that I'm really puzzled about; "Gay Cows"? Very unusual choice for the title of this writing, but no worries...


Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the short poem has great value, it is concise and to the point.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm a hopeless romantic trapped in the body of a tomboy intellectual. I am a dreamer, a feline imitator, a coffee-addict, a sci-fi enthusiast, and a creative. more..

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