Vertical World

Vertical World

A Poem by Chirpy!
"

Wah

"

Vertical world

Falling up

Floating  down

Am I

when here

closer to god?

Vertical world

Here

Whims

send me flying

Thoughts

throw me down

the twist

and 

the turn

here

they are, floating

the will

and

the way

here

they are, falling

Vertical world

Floating up

Falling down

Vertical World


© 2010 Chirpy!



Author's Note

Chirpy!
I'm in my happy place so be as mean as you want. ^_^
I AM SO BORED

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I'll need to view some of your other work to form a comparison. This seems forced, into vertical format. More of the intellect, rather than from the heart. I lack the education to analyse style and format. However some well placed punctuation may add congruence. As to content, portrays a whimsical prospective on the creative thought process.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Chirpy!

3 Years Ago

Recalling my feelings when writing this, I can understand your comment!
You are completely rig.. read more
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I have a poem named, "The Secret Of Being Poetic" It is about letting go, so the heart can shape the.. read more

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Added on December 9, 2010
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