Vertical World

Wah

Vertical world

Falling up

Floating  down

Am I

when here

closer to god?

Vertical world

Here

Whims

send me flying

Thoughts

throw me down

the twist

and 

the turn

here

they are, floating

the will

and

the way

here

they are, falling

Vertical world

Floating up

Falling down

Vertical World

Author's Note

I'm in my happy place so be as mean as you want. ^_^
I AM SO BORED

Reviews

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

I'll need to view some of your other work to form a comparison. This seems forced, into vertical format. More of the intellect, rather than from the heart. I lack the education to analyse style and format. However some well placed punctuation may add congruence. As to content, portrays a whimsical prospective on the creative thought process.

[Chirpy!]

Recalling my feelings when writing this, I can understand your comment!
You are completely right, the poem is forced and born from the brain. At the time, the poem was just me being "happy". (When you keep your emotions and your intellect separate, they still affect one another! Ignoring one of them in favor of the other has a disorienting effect in my experience. Nothing like happiness, but certainly a comparable sensation.)

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

I have a poem named, "The Secret Of Being Poetic" It is about letting go, so the heart can shape the outcome.