A Tree

This poem has been originally written by me !! Its about valuing trees and their importance in our lives. I wrote it in ten minutes and yeah I am just in seventh so if you have some ideas plz do tell.

I have been created by the god who created you,

He made you living and made me living too.

But the powers you got to move and speak are not present in me

as they are in you.

You can talk, speak do anything you want, you can

it made me feel dull in front of you.

But today I found my importance and usefulness too.

I came to know that I'm the one who makes the world,

beautiful for you.

I make living easy for all living creatures.

And all living creatures include you too.

I have seen trees taller than me,

being cut down by you.

Don't you realize that endangering us,

will endanger you too.

Me and my friends have been purifying the air for a long time now,

but we have never asked anything in return.

Except for kindness and love,

and that's what is important for me and you.

With population increasing and pollution too,

you should realize that I'm the one who calls rain for you.

I give you fruit and vegetables for you,

because I know its important for you.

THANK YOU

Author's Note

Please comment and please tell me all the ways I can improve my writing...THANK U!!

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

23 lines of poetry in 10 minutes...with correction and grammar...good job with this one...