Moody Girl

Moody Girl

A Poem by barleygirl
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just some spooky fun . . .

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Life is mystifying with this moody little miss of mine
she always keeps me guessing as I swig a little more moonshine
first she says: “get over here and give me a kiss!”
but then she fades for days while her loving I miss
my baby’s kinda baffling but she’s such a ray of sweet sunshine.

Life can be so silly with this willy-nilly girl of mine
can’t tell if love’s in bloom or if we’re skidding to the finish line
first she says: “bare your chubby cheeks for a spank!”
then she batters my buns with a splintered plank
such a wacky woman and for her I must defer and pine.

Life is getting gruesome doing twosomes with this girl of mine
her kinky domination rarely sends me to the ole cloud nine
now it’s: “open wide because I’m going to hurl”
I’m waaaaaay over-tweaked by my freaky girl!
no more will I follow, I’d rather swallow turpentine.




© 2017 barleygirl



Author's Note

barleygirl
A spoof on the song "Spooky" by Atlantic Rhythm Section:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cMAo0m4E4Lc

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oh i use to sing along with that song ... seems it came on when driving home after a party night ... mmmmmmmm such memories ... your poem has all your wonderful talents displayed..for rhyme, rhythm and humor ... kind of gross closing thinking of the snake swallowing tho ;}
E.
ps. i kept waiting for the "turn" to involve your wonderful pet companions in some way :)))

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

I could write a pet poem every day, but I don't want people to realize how much I've turned into an .. read more



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I like the silliness, that me. the poem is wonderful and i enjoyed reading it twice thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

It seems like everything on the news is bad news, which makes me want to write a rant, but I end up .. read more
"Life is getting gruesome doing twosomes with this girl of mine..." ah! i love it. Good word play, "I’m waaaaaay over-tweaked ..."

You make poetry fun especially for new writers.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

4 Weeks Ago

The best compliment I've gotten in awhile! To inspire new & young writers is what I'm all about. I'm.. read more
Mirror

4 Weeks Ago

And thank you very much, Barley. Thank you.
I really loved the way you chose to put a rhythm in the lines. I am sure that this is a poem which can make anyone feel truly green! Humourous, refreshing and a memorial piece of poem!


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

I love crazy outlandish Halloween ideas & I'm glad you enjoyed it, too! *smile* Fondly, Margie
Shasha

1 Month Ago

That's really different but amazing!
I'm definitely trick or treating you.
Quite fancy the spanky tweaky freaky girl of yours.
I'll be dressed as a pumpkin. Though my invisible friend hasn't made up his mind yet.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

I'm not into girls, except for my two girl dogs & two girl bunnies! *wink! wink!* I can't wait to ge.. read more
Paul Bell

1 Month Ago

Now that Hugh is dead, I'm right into bunnies.
I am not familiar with the song but love the uplifting feel to it. The rhyming too is so appreciated. Enjoyed a lot!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Youngsters don't get my musical influence! *wink! wink!* I'm still stuck in the 1970's! Thanks for t.. read more
DIVYA

1 Month Ago

You are most welcome. It such a pleasure always!
Gee! Margie, this latest production of yours has given me something to think about.!!!
This is so "spooky" that this poor old "Limey" is still mystified. Watched the video, however , and was impressed with the guitar playing. I shall certainly be watching more of this group's videos.
I really need to get a better modern musical education. (((Hugs)

PS. Loved the response by Norbanus...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

I met Norbanus on a different writers website over 3 years ago & I was amazed when he showed up here.. read more
Excellent sure got me chuckling away.

Hey, have you considered swapping serpentine for turpentine? Just a thought. Virtual hug on its way

Posted 1 Month Ago


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barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for the brilliant suggestion! I'll change it forthwith! I was tripping on that las.. read more
Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

Aah' that feels better, reads well too x
Love your rhyming so much, it is wacky and off the wall in the strictest of professional manner, hah... *Hats off to the a top-class syllable rhymer* A wonderful spoof, and as liquid as something composed of not solids... Serpently penned...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Coming from you, I take this as a supreme compliment . . . we are mutually admiring rhymers, huh? *s.. read more
Silente

1 Month Ago

Exactly, mutually badass people, I mean rhymers... HAH... A wonderful spirit, Barley, and one that I.. read more
oh i use to sing along with that song ... seems it came on when driving home after a party night ... mmmmmmmm such memories ... your poem has all your wonderful talents displayed..for rhyme, rhythm and humor ... kind of gross closing thinking of the snake swallowing tho ;}
E.
ps. i kept waiting for the "turn" to involve your wonderful pet companions in some way :)))

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

I could write a pet poem every day, but I don't want people to realize how much I've turned into an .. read more
That is hilarious... a fun and spunky spoof of the spook.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

Thank you for appreciating my spoofy point of view! *wink! wink!* (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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