Lalochezia

Lalochezia

A Poem by barleygirl
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Profanities splatter like a sneezia
protesting an utter lack of giustizia
spewing from the lips of Letizia
before she melts into lalochezia.

Letizia agitates her witch’s brew
venting a venomous “screw you!”
her broth is the viscosity of fondue
with a thick hairy layer of mildew.

In a bizarre bout of synesthesia
a slimy sip provokes anesthesia
jinxed by her sudden dyskinesia
while attaining orgasmic lalochezia.

It’s tweaking Letizia’s last nerve
leaving no obscenity on reserve
serving her concoction with verve
cursing a heavenly hors d’oeuvre.



© 2017 barleygirl



Author's Note

barleygirl
Witchy Wordplay:
sneezia = made up word for “sneeze”
giustizia (Italian) = justice or fairness
lalochezia (la-low-cheez-ia) = emotional release of using vulgar language
synesthesia = one type of sensation (taste, smell, etc.) in response to a different type of sensory stimuli (pressure, sound, etc.)
anesthesia = loss of bodily sensations
dyskinesia = abnormal voluntary muscle movements

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Wow! So glad you explained some of the words in your Author’s Note! Wordplay in this poem is masterfull! Letizia’s Witch’s Brew is smokin’ hot and orgasmic apparently-ha! Love the Italian (I am!) reference! Great form, cadence and rhyme. Funny as HELL! Your imagery is superb- I can see her cussin’ twitchin’ slippin’ and slidin’ doing her Letizia Monster Mash for Halloween. Love this Margie!:):)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for bringing my imagery ALIVE even better than I ever imagined it! *wink! wink!* Glad to g.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

3 Weeks Ago

Loved it. You’re welcome!



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Quite an exercising adventure in etymology and all in good fun. I enjoyed the read.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Thank you, my friend. It is my belief that a good writer must love words & have fun with them! *smil.. read more
I am happy you explained all this mystery and magical words for me. Poem is very playful and there is nice flowing with words. Yes still if you can please explain me meaning. Cause i think my head is not enough for this thank you very much. Great poem indeed.

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barleygirl

1 Week Ago

I like to explore new words & I'm glad I gave the meanings too, so you could enjoy with me! Thanks f.. read more
This is a fun little piece you got here. It playfully has fun with sounds and absurdity to an amusing extent. Only error, if may point this out, is that the word is "giustizia" not "guistizia".....otherwise the pronunciation would be [gwisteezia]. Well done!!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

WOW! Your meticulous spelling is admirable! Thanks for the great catch! I take this review as the hi.. read more
emipoemi

2 Weeks Ago

no kidding, eh? that's how you know there's always some method to one's madness
There's just one word you FORGOT, .......Amnesia.
Sorry Margie , - I just had to tease ya!!

It's the Norm . (((Hugs)))



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Weeks Ago

Very funny on several levels! Great rhyme & your sign-off is particularly witty! *wink! wink!* Thank.. read more
You are flyingzee.
Witchinginthedarkzee
Just tripped over a devilzee.
You can see where this is goingzee
Now I've come down with dyskinesia.
How do i get rid of itzee.
I like this, Margiezee.



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Weeks Ago

I never did comment on your delightful riff here . . . sorry 'bout that! (((HUGS))) Gotta love a co-.. read more
I love words, and these you've made alive and playful in this dark, fun season. Your poetry moves in such colorful patterns, almost like a painted canvas, the lines brush-stroked one over the other creating a perfect flow of wildness. And your Witchy Wordplay is much appreciated too!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Weeks Ago

This started with a FB posting of the title word & I knew I just HAD to play with that! *smile* Than.. read more
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This was a fun read. Could almost hearing being sang with some haunting music to accompany it.

Thank you for sharing.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Weeks Ago

Love hearing about your wild imagination! It makes my poem even better! *smile* Fondly, Margie
Wow! So glad you explained some of the words in your Author’s Note! Wordplay in this poem is masterfull! Letizia’s Witch’s Brew is smokin’ hot and orgasmic apparently-ha! Love the Italian (I am!) reference! Great form, cadence and rhyme. Funny as HELL! Your imagery is superb- I can see her cussin’ twitchin’ slippin’ and slidin’ doing her Letizia Monster Mash for Halloween. Love this Margie!:):)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for bringing my imagery ALIVE even better than I ever imagined it! *wink! wink!* Glad to g.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

3 Weeks Ago

Loved it. You’re welcome!
What we have here folks is a pre Halloween concoction to temp each of our senses, as toxic as cobra spit, more deadly than diphtheria, just a tiny little sip will give ya tardive dyskonesia (look it up)...N

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Weeks Ago

I didn't need to look it up . . . I once took a medication that's known for causing this & that's wh.. read more
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

Until a couple of years ago, I regularly prescribed a whole shed load of medication that might occas.. read more
I am knocked up with the wordplay! new vocabularies created :)).... These are the sort of stuff Musicians do with Ad lib and lyrics. Kudos to you for the creativity!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Weeks Ago

Very intriguing way to compare this to the musical fun you describe! If it's not fun, why do it? Thi.. read more

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Added on October 26, 2017
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