Benny and Regrets

Benny and Regrets

A Poem by barleygirl
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inspired by Jacob & Coyote John . . .

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If I could turn regrets into an autumn day
I would un-say the times I said “go away”
I’d be watching as Benny pulls in my driveway
straddling his Harley as our smiles ricochet.

Leathers stretched taut over muscular thighs
shirtless tanned skin meant to tantalize
I try not to devour Benny with my eyes
hugging his slim hips between my thighs.

His machine growls down my country lane
wind is whipping my long untied mane
the scent of his hair is like opium in my vein
wishful conjecture might drive me insane.

Rumbling vibrations tingle every nerve
my legs squeeze tight rounding every curve
when Benny leans back I give up my reserve
my fancy is on fire like a drooling perv.

At the top of the ridge we reach our spot
he arranges all the picnic fixin’s he brought
his leathers so taut in a graceful squat
I hear myself whistle like a steamy teapot.

Uncontrollably I tackle him on the quilt
I’d almost forgotten how very well built
my hips take over as they rock and tilt
craving Benny’s hardness to the hilt.




© 2017 barleygirl



Author's Note

barleygirl
Jacob & Coyote John have recently penned some amazing poems with delightful memories of past loves & I'm inspired *smile*

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Was Benny a real person? Very funny and clever poem Margie- love that title! Great wordplay. Lovely form, flow, cadence, rhyme as always. So Naughty-ha! Great imagery of a past very steamy interlude with a leather-clad biker. ‘Oh but he’s weird and he’s wonderful’- I’ll say! Started my day with a smile!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

7 Months Ago

I was watching Elton John on TV singing "Benny and the Jets" & this is what came to me! Amazing how .. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

7 Months Ago

Love how your mind works! :) i’m in th musical mood today, so might try one too- all credit to yo.. read more
barleygirl

7 Months Ago

Love when that happens! *smile*



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So what you're really saying is. The picnic was just a ruse to jump Benny and have outdoor sex. I can live with that. Just don't take advantage of the lad. Give him Sunday off.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

7 Months Ago

The older I get, the more dangerous I become! *heh! heh! heh!* I try not to molest too many young me.. read more
Paul Bell

7 Months Ago

You too. And molest as many guys as possible. lol
Laughing here....my last poem mentions, "the taut denim of his jeans" and yours now speaks of "Leathers stretched taut over muscular thighs"....fanning myself! The imagery in this one is so exact, I felt like the voyeur and the title....had to think of "Benny and the Jets" by Elton John! A fun write to read, Margie. Lydi**

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

7 Months Ago

Here's one thigh-fanatic that loves hearing from another! *wink! wink!* I have your recent poem in m.. read more
Lydia

7 Months Ago

I knew that song must have been a bit of inspiration! Happy Halloween to you too!
What a great fun read 'Benny & Regrets' turned out to be. Superbly constructed and with great flow, witty as hell & just a tad risque. Lucky bloke if you ask me....N

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

7 Months Ago

Get outa here, I bet ya say that to all us young Vikings
barleygirl

7 Months Ago

*giggle* . . .
Neville Pettitt

7 Months Ago

Just as I thought, tis true then........virtual hug
Was Benny a real person? Very funny and clever poem Margie- love that title! Great wordplay. Lovely form, flow, cadence, rhyme as always. So Naughty-ha! Great imagery of a past very steamy interlude with a leather-clad biker. ‘Oh but he’s weird and he’s wonderful’- I’ll say! Started my day with a smile!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

7 Months Ago

I was watching Elton John on TV singing "Benny and the Jets" & this is what came to me! Amazing how .. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

7 Months Ago

Love how your mind works! :) i’m in th musical mood today, so might try one too- all credit to yo.. read more
barleygirl

7 Months Ago

Love when that happens! *smile*
Whoa! Hot romance and motorsickles--now that's something I can dig! Even if it might not have happened, let's pretend it did. I always loved giving girls a ride.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

7 Months Ago

Nothing like the vibrations of a well-tuned machine, huh? *smile* The ultimate seduction! And you ar.. read more
Samuel Dickens

7 Months Ago

There are stories about guys pulling off a spark plug wire in order to make the bike vibrate more.
barleygirl

7 Months Ago

I should've known that you would know all the tricks! *wink! wink!*
flattered to be part of the inspiration...but you, alone, have that creativity to play on words and phrases with such deftness...

fun piece----:)))

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

7 Months Ago

Where I live, it's a loop, about 100 miles of country curves that comes out near Monterey, CA . . . .. read more

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