Feel Your Whiskers

Feel Your Whiskers

A Poem by barleygirl
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for my best friend (RIP) . . .

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Sluggish December sparkles stay low in the sky
with barely the gumption to grill an afternoon
lazily doing the day in short skips ridge to ridge
and any accumulated warmth goes “poof!”
the moment thick chaparral swallows the sun.

Such shivery sunsets play on and on for hours
the barely darkening universe seeping along
I go to the glass to catch the day’s last dazzle
an ember radiates warmth all around my neck
and I know you’re here . . . I feel your whiskers.

When chill winter gloaming is toasting my heart
with memories of how I would laugh and laugh
when I picked up the phone to your hearty voice
no words needed as we chortled our shared joy
into murmurs and nibbles of sweet nonsense.

You’re still nearby although it’s been three years
you know how good these years have been to me
as you’ve watched me take your lessons to heart
thank you for teaching me to finally love myself
when the gloaming glows . . . I feel your whiskers.




© 2017 barleygirl



Author's Note

barleygirl
My best friend, who died 3 yrs ago, saved my life at my lowest point.

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dear Margie... you have the gift of expression that touches our heart in so many ways. The whiskers of memory brush over our life when bright colored lights and falling snow are settling on holly trees. You always have Poet friends who understand. truly, Pat

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

Thank you for sharing your sweet words of understanding! It really does make a big difference, to be.. read more



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Very well way to remember a friend in a poem and share it with friends your feeling and genuinely spiritual in nature Love God Love love your Neighbor as yourself and the world has other views.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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barleygirl

9 Months Ago

Thank you for seeing all the hidden nuances of my message . . . indeed my best friend's lessons for .. read more
very evocative and well penned!

Posted 9 Months Ago


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barleygirl

9 Months Ago

Thanks so much for your encouraging words! Fondly, Margie
Iam glad he was there when you needed most, he will always be in your heart, a never ending flame that will keep you warm for ever. By remembering those moments even though painful you wil keep him with you always. Um beijo

Posted 9 Months Ago


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barleygirl

9 Months Ago

Thank you for the sweet words & even sweeter kiss! *smile* I am blessed to have this memory, to remi.. read more
Good friends come and go.
Great friends, dead or alive never leave you.
Like your description of winter. Slightly sluggish.
It's the time of year we slightly stand still.
But strangely enough. It's the time of year we start to recall people who walked with us for a time.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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barleygirl

9 Months Ago

As autumn turns to winter, you are right about this being my time to catch those waves of melancholy.. read more
Such a sadness to your words, and yet a beautiful tribute to someone who wrapped love and inspiration about you. Memories of voice, the feel of whiskers.. what treasures, Margie... sighhhh.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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barleygirl

9 Months Ago

I think of Mitch almost every day, but it's not a sad feeling . . . I really do want to share my lit.. read more
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emmajoy

9 Months Ago

My friend Ali is my Mitch.. a strapping nursing sister who could come out with all guns blazing but,.. read more
dear Margie... you have the gift of expression that touches our heart in so many ways. The whiskers of memory brush over our life when bright colored lights and falling snow are settling on holly trees. You always have Poet friends who understand. truly, Pat

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

Thank you for sharing your sweet words of understanding! It really does make a big difference, to be.. read more
Such a sweet, tender write. What a lovely tribute to one who gave so much. Was really an emotional, thought-provoking couple of paragraphs that make you want to cuddle with the fuzzy bestie.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

I love that you read this to be about a furry friend . . . it's actually about a man, but I wanted i.. read more
Just perfect in imagery and sad in content. Every line unfolds in charming descriptions till the moment of truth when death takes away our beloved pets and the lessons we do learn from them.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

9 Months Ago

This poem is written about a man, but I was also trying to make it sound like it might be for a pet,.. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

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What a sweet tribute to a lost dear friend, Margie. Your poem conveys your pain, but also your gratitude and love. Like death, winter is inescapable--but so is spring, and therein lies hope. Thanks for sharing with us.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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barleygirl

9 Months Ago

His death happened at a time when I spent a year learning to walk again after neck injury . . . so m.. read more
It reminded me of Dan, someone I lost, the bitter sweet twang in your tale causes a grown man to cry, I can taste the honesty and you must know I have eaten it all. Sorry kid none for you!

regards,
al

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barleygirl

9 Months Ago

You are so creative & expressive, even in a review! Sorry to make you cry . . . I'm all cried out no.. read more

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