Cybersmooch

Cybersmooch

A Poem by barleygirl
"

could apply to several of you . . .

"


Although we’re savannahs and seas apart
seeing you online jolts me like a jumpstart
your text revives like a bountiful bouquet
ours may be virtual but enduring foreplay.

We’ll probably never inhabit the same room
but oddly this drawback gives me no gloom
other online diversions are everyday hooch
compared to your lingering cybersmooch.

I love when you share what you’re all about
if we stumble on s**t it’s easy to chill out
in our virtual reality we agree to disagree
no need to relinquish my crave for carefree.

I’ve no tolerance for inflicting romantic trauma
I need simple solitude after decades of drama
just give me the whisper of an imaginary kiss
it’s my no-complications ticket to eternal bliss.




© 2018 barleygirl



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Margie - you are so clever with words, I have not doubt
if I could rhyme mine like you do, I'd give out a shout.
Romance in any form can be so much fun, is that a pun?
I think not. I'd like to say it'd be nice to meet, one day.
Oh, oh - not so, would the bubble burst?

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Months Ago

I agree with every line wholeheartedly! *smile* Thanks for the reply poem to touch my heart (((HUGS).. read more
Dave

3 Months Ago

You are more than welcome - and deserving.

Take care - Dave



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Such a sweet poem. In a completely platonic way, I know a lot of the feelings described here. Even though I'll likely never meet anyone from my Cafe family in person, it's alright. Just seeing them here is enough, and it's great to talk and read and review with everyone. I love the term "cybersmooch".

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for "feeling me" (in a cyber way, of course!) *tee! hee!* I love the way my main b.. read more
Margie - you are so clever with words, I have not doubt
if I could rhyme mine like you do, I'd give out a shout.
Romance in any form can be so much fun, is that a pun?
I think not. I'd like to say it'd be nice to meet, one day.
Oh, oh - not so, would the bubble burst?

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Months Ago

I agree with every line wholeheartedly! *smile* Thanks for the reply poem to touch my heart (((HUGS).. read more
Dave

3 Months Ago

You are more than welcome - and deserving.

Take care - Dave
You are being very naughty with this cybersmooch tease! You may have forgotten that some of them are of advancing years and their tickers might not stand the excitement and then your postnote 'could apply to several of you' might cause trouble in the cafe. Now seriously, I'm afraid to tell you that 'cybersmooching' is pretty tame stuff by today's standards and you may have to' up your game' considerably.
Joking apart, you have covered some very topical and interesting issues in your excellent poem - or as Mr McEnroe said 'are you being serious!'
Cheers and whispers,
Alan

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Months Ago

Norm has actually told me that some of my writing is a little too risqué for his ancient ticker to .. read more
I agree dear friend. Nice to be polite and send imaginary kisses.
"I’ve no tolerance for inflicting romantic trauma
I need simple solitude after decades of drama
just give me the whisper of an imaginary kiss
it’s my no-complications ticket to eternal bliss."
You and I have known. Romance can be trickery. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Months Ago

I love the way you show me how you relate to my message & you're always so authentic! (((HUGS))) Fon.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

We agree on the simple rules of life. Be polite and kind always.
I love this one, Margie. It has me grinning from ear to ear. It's so delightfully light and frothy, yet also manages to come across as sincere. It's certainly a great way to simplify your life. Thank you for another entertaining read.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Months Ago

This is my answer to all those poor suffering poets who write about how they've been screwed & left .. read more
The Iron Horseman

3 Months Ago

Agreed. Absolutely. Perhaps they just need a better sense of fun!
well they do say that absence makes the heart grow fonder. the way technology is racing these days, probably won't be long before that can be done "literally". ok as long as we don't catch a social media STD! enjoyed the wording and message. nice one ... :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Months Ago

Thanks for joining in with my lighthearted fun diatribe, your thoughts on the matter are much enjoye.. read more
This is such a sweet poem Margie... I agree... maybe we will never meet...but those we know so closely...share such sweet friendship with... their warm smiles are always soothing


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Months Ago

I've tried many social websites, but being in a community of writers seems like the best of all worl.. read more
Ardra

3 Months Ago

Very true...I feel at home here... :)
And it's always nice to be in a place full of people w.. read more
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RWE
I love the title and everything in this poem. It's certainly true in the Cafe and perhaps a few other social media sites. I'm always impressed how find such playful words and craft the rhymes. Happy Saturday!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Months Ago

My natural outlook is grouchy b***h (being bipolar & in constant all-over pain) . . . so silly-a*s p.. read more
mwah! my little Barley Girl! oh let me be one of them please ...... ;) this is such a wonderful read...i could not agree more whole heartedly with every line ..you are so gifted with the rhythm and rhyme of poetry ..always smooth...never trite...always with the twinkle of your humor ..God bless you Margie ..God bless you big big ;)
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

;)....................... did i win? Norman's kinda quite :))))))))))))))
Norman223

3 Months Ago

I'm biding my time.......... ;)))))
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

uh oh :{ .............
Haha! This is so good! Your virtual hugs are so warming. Keep showering us with your amazing Poetry. 💕💕

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the shower of great sweetness, as we here in California trudge thru our coldest & drie.. read more
Ghania

3 Months Ago

Haha. It's my pleasure alwaysss. ((HUGS BACK))

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