Incommunicado

Incommunicado

A Poem by barleygirl
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acrostic = first letter of each line spells out title

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Incommunicado is my middle name
no words come when language goes lame
communication crashed within my mainframe
only my eyebrows feel free to exclaim
maybe my grin might be coaxed to proclaim
mini-frosted flutterbys with flawless aim
under their spell my inner whimsy is tame
nebulous apparitions coax a leafy game
instantly entranced by a sycamore flame
crimson imagination gilds a golden frame
and wicked daydreams say adios to shame
dreamcatcher becomes my new nickname
over the moon I found a fresh word game.





© 2018 barleygirl



Author's Note

barleygirl
Last thing I remember . . . an abundance of tiny white butterflies fluttering all around my place every day & pretty soon my mind went the same way . . . sorry for going incommunicado . . . I've missed seeing & reading all my friends here at the cafe! (((HUGS)))

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this is gorgeous i love it, i didnt realise you hadnt been on for a while as ive been off since i left work doing other things, are you ok?
i love your poem, i t rhymes perfectly, wish i could rhyme like you.
also the way the first letters spell out the name great idea
this is a lighthearted poem enjoyed it a lot x

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

I'm glad we were both "taking off" around the same time, so we didn't miss much of each other! *smil.. read more
Juliespenhere

2 Weeks Ago

great minds think alike lol



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Woah such poetic incommunicado then, in communion with the celestial too. I ESP admired the poetic wordings sycamore, nebulous, and those lines as a whole. Such an awesome mono rhyme poem, brill and great to enjoy with poetic senses. Kudos I must say. Way to go barley girl

Soo nice to read from your inking again, pleez do comment/add your thoughts/ review my newest poem too. I like saying hi to poets and poetry.


Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

3 Days Ago

Your enthusiastic & detailed comments warm my heart & toes. Sorry I haven't been reviewing as often .. read more
Very clever, dear friend. But 'mainframe'? Really? What year is this anyway? Or are you using the NSA's computers? :D
Just pulling your leg! Loved this. It manages to be smart, funny and flippantly sincere all at the same time. Quite a feat!
I take it this was written at the time that your computers were down, but if you are hiding a mainframe in your living room I'm not surprised you had problems! Lol!

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

4 Days Ago

My first college computer class required punching out a single line of blips on the top edge of card.. read more
The Iron Horseman

4 Days Ago

I worked in that era too. Your programs were all on punch cards, which were loaded into steel boxes .. read more
Oh! I love this one! I think the funniest thing about you and me is that our styles could not be more different, but our thoughts are so similar... this made me smile - and admire your ability to play so well with rhyme - ps any good acrostic makes you forget it's an acrostic - this definitely fits!

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

4 Days Ago

As a technical writer, I was an expert at cramming a variety of info into a tight space in different.. read more
Brilliant! We all go incommunicado now and then. But only a few make a poem out of it. You did that very well!

The rhyming is exceptional! Why don't you try writing rap? :D

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

6 Days Ago

I never listen to rap . . . i try to, but it just seems harsh to my natural vibe. So I can't authent.. read more
Well, as a fellow evacuee (im blaming the red, rotund one for my absence), Inspiration hasnt so much left me this time, as I have went into self imposed exile until the christmas lights come down and all the jolly holly has withered and died.
I have been writing a little though,so perhaps it isnt inspiration leaving, but her taking a break from all my festive griping. It's either that or she has went to get my xmas present. All i'll say is, I bet its musical f*****g socks :)
Good to see you back Margie.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

6 Days Ago

Being OCD at heart, once I get into a groove of writing & reviewing at the cafe, I tend to be more i.. read more
Oh, how each line builds and pulls us into the next step of you! You are such a bright soul here, and I'm glad you still come to make your presence known, to bless us with your words. And glad the cafe is another homeplace for you too. Absolutely brilliant acrostic!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

6 Days Ago

Thank you for your beautiful words and you can be sure that the cafe has given me more than I've giv.. read more
An owl on the moon

6 Days Ago

Reading your words.. reading of your journey... so painful... to full of purpose... so transforming .. read more
love the playfulness of this one. great word that 'Incommunicado' and your words and images do it justice. i enjoyed each and every line - great job weaving. was hooked with a smile from start to finish. this really sticks with me like a hypnotic state. right on target. clever and memorable miss smarty-pants... :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

As a fan of Henry David Thoreau, I can imagine you would have many layers of understanding for my me.. read more
Awhh ..I really like this incommunicado acrostic..
Write of yours with delightful rhyme and alliteration
throughout.. good to see you back ..nice job
On this one

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

The rains have come early this year for a change & I keep slipping into an incommunicado hibernation.. read more
  Fran Marie

1 Week Ago

you're so very welcome
and we miss you too Barley Girl ... i love you so much! an unbelievable acrostic .. no one picks a 13 letter word .. at least if in ones right mind ;))))))))))
and your rhyme ..i'm tellin' you ...its simply endearing to me ..
https://youtu.be/DP5-qJSzDUg
and if i may...a big fat hug your way my friend!!!
E.


Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

When I watched the clip you suggest, I realize I never watch animated stuff . . . maybe a throwback .. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

Those little white butterflies are magic.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Week Ago

With early rains here (very rare with our recent drought years) the creatures are going crazy with a.. read more

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Central Coast, CA



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