Silhouette...

Sensual, goddess like...

From the balcony of my mind,
Shines the moon light of lust...
I see your glimmering silhouette,
A sensuous body, glazed with stardust...

As the moonlight falls upon your skin,
I see glimpses of dark temptation...
Soft and supple your mounds,
Your face Aphrodite's reincarnation...

You walk out of the shadows,
Revealing yourself divine...
Basking in the moonlight,
Dew drops on your naked glory, shine...

You touch yourself so tender,
Leaving you aroused and moist...
The gentle breeze wraps you,
I stand witness to this heavenly tryst...

You reveal to me your grandeur,
As with pleasure you sigh...
Your legs covered in your sweetness,
You give yourself a high...

You walk back into the shadows,
Disappearing in the moonlight of lust...
As I see your silhouette,
Shimmering with heavenly stardust...

Reviews

[Carolann Dowsett]

Wow nice, This was very sweet and sensual. Nicely written.

[That_Girl]

Sounds like a dream. Not bad at all! Very soft and sensual with a bit of heat. I liked it. The exaggerated use of ellipsis marks is just that though, exaggerated.

[barricade]

Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you liked it. Will jus edit it as per your guidance :)

[That_Girl]

Oh no need to, it's yours and you should do with it as you please... that was just my opinion. :) You're welcome.

[K.]

Very nicely done, this creates a very vivid sensual picture.
I love that.
I do think that you should work on the rhythm just a little though. If you're going to rhyme, you should try and keep the same beat, of course that may just be my style or the way that I'm reading your words.
All in all a wonderful write.

[barricade]

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it.