Lost in my truth...Trapped in your lies.......

Lost in my truth...Trapped in your lies.......

A Poem by barricade

The lights haven't been as bright as they used to be,
nor are the rains as moist.
The sun isn't as warm as it was,
now that you just aren't "that" close to me.

Everything around me is so still,
time seems to have come to a halt.
There is silence even within the noises,
and weakness in my "used to be strong" will.

My soul is incomplete, empty and void,
body drags lifeless and dull.
I am engulfed in our memories and cold despair,
with plethora of pain and a love destroyed.

Our times together are long gone and so are you.
My days are now drab, lackluster,
nights lonely, painful stab.
All that I believed in was lies and nothing seems to be true...




"You should've fought harder

and maybe WE could've gotten farther...

When I thought we could've had it all
YOU left ME broken whilst in his arms you still stand tall...

At the peak of all this mess
YOU gave up on ME and settled for less...

YOU were blinded and just couldn't see 
He is nothing compared to what I am and everything I used to be..."

© 2013 barricade



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"There is silence even within the noises"
This is my favorite line, expresses so much. The entire poem held me captivated by the emotional depth and sincerity shown throughout. The colors and capitalization added so much as well. Very well written, B.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"There is silence even within the noises"
This is my favorite line, expresses so much. The entire poem held me captivated by the emotional depth and sincerity shown throughout. The colors and capitalization added so much as well. Very well written, B.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was going through this so recently... This is all very well-expressed. I like your implications with all the colors and capitalization. It gets better :) Just trace back to when you had it all and try to find the key thing that you've lost. Then get it back.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I remember reading your poems few years back.
You have remarkably improved.

Never stop exercising your talent.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sad...I like the beginning the most...when you love or care for someone and are around them days seem to be brighter and such but when they leave days can seem dark and grey. I do believe people get over these feelings though...sometimes it takes longer than what we want. It's hard to let go sometimes, hope your days soon will become bright again.

Good Job

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well written! love the rhyme scheme and the way the emotion just flows through the piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Barricade this is very well written and beautifully sad.. Was this an online relationship perhaps?
" There is silence even within the noises, I love this line.. Your ink drips with feelings in this one.. xoxo shallimarRose

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

4 Years Ago

The relationship is (was) very real...very close...closer than my breath...than my beating heart...
shallimarRose

4 Years Ago

I understand love and the loss of it.. This was a beautiful write .. xo
Very sad!!! Nicely penned

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barricade

4 Years Ago

Thank you :) glad you liked it...

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