Painting with words...

Feelings that I pour
on an empty page,
always conjure 
the same image...
 
As ink entwines
with cold raw parchment,
the picture so conceived
reminiscences of an immemorial attachment...
 
Words that I write
slowly flicker and wane, 
they blend into a face
that helms my love domain...
 
My poetry is your painting
on my heart's canvas so vast,
colored with feelings
and emotions that evermore last...

Reviews

[Traci]

Love the creativity you possess in this piece of art. You truly capture each emotion throughout, feelings that are heartfelt, so much more than just words. You have painted a lovely picture with your words, and I look forward to reading more from you B.

[Divine Pain]

Your so creative I love it!

[Ayesha Atif]

Wow, wow!
Like Wow!
I love the way you carried the poem. It's beautiful. And it feels amazing to see a man loving someone with all of his heart.
These feelings are precious and your words which describe them are magical.
I don't know how you gather these words and how your poem moves so beautifully.
Wow man. This one is .. you don't its out of the world.

Keep exercising your talent.

[Bowers]

Creative piece you've written here, very touching, and deep... You are very talented and express your feelings in a VERY artistic way ;) great write

[Sami Khalil]

"they blend into a facethat helms my love domain... My poetry is your paintingon my heart's canvas so vast,colored with feelings"

Splendid

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice painting of someone special through those words.
Thanks for the share. It's a wonderful tribute. Keep writing.

[WatcherInSilence]

Amazing! Pure emotion! There could have been no better way to convey that pain and sadness...

Great poem!