Painting with words...

Painting with words...

A Poem by barricade

Feelings that I pour
on an empty page,
always conjure
the same image...

As ink entwines
with cold raw parchment,
the picture so conceived
reminiscences of an immemorial attachment...

Words that I write
slowly flicker and wane,
they blend into a face
that helms my love domain...

My poetry is your painting
on my heart's canvas so vast,
colored with feelings
and emotions that evermore last...

© 2013 barricade



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Love the creativity you possess in this piece of art. You truly capture each emotion throughout, feelings that are heartfelt, so much more than just words. You have painted a lovely picture with your words, and I look forward to reading more from you B.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, wow!
Like Wow!
I love the way you carried the poem. It's beautiful. And it feels amazing to see a man loving someone with all of his heart.
These feelings are precious and your words which describe them are magical.
I don't know how you gather these words and how your poem moves so beautifully.
Wow man. This one is .. you don't its out of the world.

Keep exercising your talent.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the creativity you possess in this piece of art. You truly capture each emotion throughout, feelings that are heartfelt, so much more than just words. You have painted a lovely picture with your words, and I look forward to reading more from you B.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Creative piece you've written here, very touching, and deep... You are very talented and express your feelings in a VERY artistic way ;) great write

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"they blend into a facethat helms my love domain... My poetry is your paintingon my heart's canvas so vast,colored with feelings"

Splendid

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice painting of someone special through those words.
Thanks for the share. It's a wonderful tribute. Keep writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing! Pure emotion! There could have been no better way to convey that pain and sadness...

Great poem!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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