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UNDETERRED ME...

UNDETERRED ME...

A Poem by barricade

The man with a million dreams,
some fulfilled, some unrequited,
some washed away in teary streams.

The man with a lion heart,
has loved, has lost
and has even been torn apart.

The man with an undying soul,
that lived and died,
yet remains it's whole.

Fulfilled or not,
I dare to dream again.
Accepted or denied,
I dare to feel again.

For dreams are who I am,
my feelings define my soul.
I'm not what perfection is made of,
but I offer my truest self, whole.

A dreamer, a wanderer,
I'm guided by my heart.
A giver, a patron,
I'm here to play my part.

Accept me, abandon me
or ignore me if you must.
Love me, hate me
but in me, you can blindly trust...

© 2014 barricade



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Everyone has a past where one has dealt with a variety of troubles. Everyone carries their own personal collection of scars. And yet, despite that, they also carry the endless possibilities of making this world a better place for others.. Everyone is cracked, a little bit broken. But then, these cracks make us unique and possibly even whole for some. Well penned. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a deep and we have all been in a situation where we feel like the way you do in this piece. It takes a strong person to see the glass half full as oppose to half empty.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Looks like a dark past with a hope in the end. Pandorica opened. I like the way you have divided into Stanzas and every stanza has an ending. I like this poem. Well done, and if it represents a reality, Keep it up. you are brave

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Barricade
Immense improvement in writing. Wow, I feel unpolished!
Excellent write I can relate to.

Keep exercising your talent.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Everyone has a past where one has dealt with a variety of troubles. Everyone carries their own personal collection of scars. And yet, despite that, they also carry the endless possibilities of making this world a better place for others.. Everyone is cracked, a little bit broken. But then, these cracks make us unique and possibly even whole for some. Well penned. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

O wow..
The Man with a Lion Heart..
Hats off to u
m speechless.. !! what u write is so deep that it takes a while to get back into usual mindset..
u r my inspiration..!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

O wow..
The Man with a Lion Heart..
Hats off to u
m speechless.. !! what u write is so deep that it takes a while to get back into usual mindset..
u r my inspiration..!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago



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