Friendship

Friendship

A Poem by B.J
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A life long friendship to a friend in hospital

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We've sat on clouds together
Share our dreams, together
Come with me on a cloud one more time
And together we will share our dreams
We've laughed and cried together, so many times
We have said goodbye many times over the years
But we always return, together we have shared many dreams
Together we sit, floating, on a cloud, not coming down
I think about your dreams, the dreams we shared together
All those years ago, we are different now, we are older and gray
Yet the sun still shines on us, making us grow
There are no rules now, we can do whatever we wish
No secrets to hide, we are open an honest, it's been a long time
All day we dream, about our lives, yet we can still be strong
We sit together, on a cloud, float above, watching the doves circle
So share with me Your dreams

© 2016 B.J



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A true and lasting friendship is not always easy to find. I have 3, two I met in second grade at school, the other on my first job. Now living in different states we still correspond each week by phone or internet.
A nice tribute to lasting friendships. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


B.J

1 Year Ago

She is a dear friend we have been in a long lasting friendship for nearly 50yrs. That gives you a ro.. read more
friendships that are true are precious beyond a value .. i thought your prose may be a little repetitive but upon finishing reading i noticed your description and understand the importance of getting the point across ..the length and trials of a friendship lasting a lifetime, as i said, is beyond value .. my prayers for your friend and for you :(
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


B.J

1 Year Ago

She is in a nursing home now in poor health it is devastating for her family we have been friends fo.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

i have three friends from high school days ...we remain in touch tho distance separates us ...i am s.. read more
B.J

1 Year Ago

:)........................
'.. have said goodbye many times over the years ~ But we always return, together we have shared many dreams ~~ Together we sit, floating, on a cloud, not coming down.. '

A beautiful and gentle poem for your dear friend. Lovely phrasing, thoughts as soft as those clouds you''ve shared in the past. You've probably recalled and savoured those wonderful hours so much recently.

Thank you for sharing such personal emotions. I so hope your friend will soon recover so she or he can read your very sincere feelings.

Posted 1 Year Ago


B.J

1 Year Ago

Our friendship has lasted a lifetime and we are still very close, she will never come out of hospita.. read more

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Added on October 19, 2016
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B.J
B.J

South Australia, Rural, Australia



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I live in rural South Australia, among the best wine district in the state. I enjoy dabbling with words, seeing what I can create. I appreciate creative reviews. more..

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