Soul Fire

A new poem, hope u all will enjoy it :D. This one I made for my closest soul on this earth, my dearest one. Thank you

"I sit the by the falling tree

Play my harp as you stay still

There down by the river's cold

I see you lay down, by the winter's fold.

Your gaze searches deep

Within my heart like a summer breeze

You drink from the heath of snow

I taste from your sweetest soul.

Hear you whisper your desire

It draws me deep with passion's fire

You come closer, touch my heart

Ignite me upon this lightless night.

I fall deeper in your arms

You keep my gaze into your charms.

My little harp catches near

Our love becomes so dear

You lay closer to my side

Kiss my lips, you much admire

Play your hands upon my mane

Explore me with your lust and fair."

Author's Note

What did you think?...

Reviews

[Barbara Borel]

This is lovely. Very descriptive and well written. I felt inside the poem.

[Roselyn Rose]

Thank you my dear Barbara :)

[Emerson Rune]

I loved the imagery here. It was a really lovely poem.

[Roselyn Rose]

Much appreciated Rune :)

[wordman]

a sweet passionate write,loved it !

[Roselyn Rose]

thnx very very much for the kind comment

[wordman]

my pleasure !

[Mansu vml]

Well.. you made it well.. enjoyed
Thank you for sharing..

[Roselyn Rose]

Thank you very much :)

[Alex Doerner]

I agree, this is really well written! I liked it. (:

[Roselyn Rose]

Thank you dear Alex happy you enjoyed

[Nwang]

This is an extremely well written piece. Loved it from the beginning to the end. Great writing.

[Roselyn Rose]

thank you so much Nwang for the kind review :) im happy u liked it