Spirit Moves

Spirit moves in me

Like a snake through the tall grass

Slow unseen power

Reviews

[Arthur Henn]

"Slow unseen power"

This is a great line
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The power within
Flowing like running water
Only seen through love

Art

[Poeticpiers]

Haikus are a difficult form to write. To say much with few words takes practice You seem to have mastered the art I am fond of oriental poetry but prefer the longer choka to the haiku and senryu

[Mariah]

OOh, that's a good haiku. People always think it's easy to write them, but it takes a way with words to be able to say something in so few words.