A Riddle, She Is

A Riddle, She Is

A Poem by BLBrown

Small and meek, she makes her way

Looking back most every day

Wounds of metal, and glassy ridges

Fearful and faithless, a riddle, she is

With everything to lose and nothing to gain

That’s just how she is, no meaning remains

 

© 2012 BLBrown


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Difficult times are expressed vividly in this writing.

"Fearful and faithless, a riddle, she is" I understand where this line comes from... you have still bright days ahead, and more that will be difficult. Thank you for expressing your journey and allowing us to read your work. I hope the responses you receive help in some small way. You have great strength in your writing, and in who you are as a person.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Difficult times are expressed vividly in this writing.

"Fearful and faithless, a riddle, she is" I understand where this line comes from... you have still bright days ahead, and more that will be difficult. Thank you for expressing your journey and allowing us to read your work. I hope the responses you receive help in some small way. You have great strength in your writing, and in who you are as a person.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'Wounds of metal, and glassy ridges, fearful and faithless, a riddle, she is.'' That such a beautiful line. I love this poem, it's very deep and expresses a lot. I enjoyed reading this a lot. This was a great read, well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

expresses despair, pain, and fear. we're not told what happened to you but i imagine someone has hurt you. great poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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BLBrown
BLBrown

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Hello, my name is Barbara. Writing is my calling in life. It took me awhile but I've finally answered. I will write anything, poetry, ditties, short stories, and am currently also working on a .. more..

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